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Chapter Two... The little boy grew up like a normal kid, raised by the old woman that helped him survive his birth. Now 9 years old, he was playing outside with his father's old katana. "Be careful with that, Terry!" said the old woman, and she sat down again next to the man she was talking to, "He's very energetic. Like his mother." "Don't mention her. I have forgotten who she was." "No, you didn't." "Don't try to talk guilt into me, Christine. She cursed me with this kid, he took her away from me. They're both guilty." "Why do you hate the Dar'rians so much, Alex?" The man took a deep breath, "They were the reason my parents were killed. We were trying to protect them from the other humans, but we paid the ultimate price." "But still you married their princess." "I loved Norayell. She swore to give up her believes. She gave up that cursed emerald on her forehead. She lost her powers... Or at least, that's what she told me." The woman looked him in the eyes and smiled, "Sometimes, even when we give up that what we believe in, those that follow will carry on a part of that very same believe. Don't blame Norayell, don't blame this kid." "THEN WHO SHOULD I BLAME!?" the man suddenly got up, "That kid is a curse. Nothing good can come from that." "Is that why you took his destiny away from him?" "I WILL NOT LET A SON OF MINE BECOME MY OWN PEOPLE'S DOOM!" The woman got up too, but more gentle than the man, "His destiny is not ours to decide, or to prevent. When the time comes, he WILL follow that path. The real question is, will he be able to forgive you when the time comes?" A deadly silence was broken only by a short phrase that would end the entire talk forgood. "This conversation is over," the man said, and he walked away. In the nearby distance, Terry put the sword down and watched as his father walked out of his life.

Posted by: Cryostix Tue Apr 19, 2005 @ 11:14am

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Anglophile
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Commented on: Tue Apr 19, 2005 @ 07:26pm


	<center>Sweet peaches! gonk That's pretty good!

Commented on: Tue Apr 19, 2005 @ 10:08pm


	Thank you! Chapter 3 coming soon!!!

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Commented on: Tue Apr 19, 2005 @ 11:33pm


	This story's pretty good. p.s. add some actions. biggrin

Commented on: Tue Apr 19, 2005 @ 11:35pm


	Everyone wants action rolleyes

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Cryostix
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Commented on: Wed Apr 20, 2005 @ 06:29am


	No action till like Chapter 5 or something... domokun

Commented on: Sat Apr 23, 2005 @ 11:30pm


	So... Anything else to say about my past?

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Nu Blaze
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Commented on: Wed Apr 27, 2005 @ 03:19am


	Oh... uhh, your past well. It's good stuff... good stuff.

Commented on: Sun May 01, 2005 @ 07:13pm


	Wut's up?

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OLD ONE GO TO NEW ONE
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Commented on: Mon May 02, 2005 @ 12:41am


	thats really cool that is almost like my past... almost

Commented on: Tue May 31, 2005 @ 10:22pm


	are you a boy or a girl?

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Commented on: Thu Jun 02, 2005 @ 11:10pm


	My stories are better....... ninja

Commented on: Fri Jun 03, 2005 @ 02:03am


	Oh my God you are good. eek I loved it. If you might please become my friend please!!!I really think you are cool and I really would like another friend smile

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Cryostix
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Commented on: Fri Jun 03, 2005 @ 07:34pm


	Thanks for liking my stories. I'm male, like my avatar. I don't lie about that. For the person who said she writes better stories than me, good going. Dogs that bark loudest, don't bite, so your words are sticks and stones. I don't write to be competitive, I write because I love writing. It would be cool if you could provide a link to your work, so I can enjoy your writing qualities! 3nodding

Commented on: Sat Jun 04, 2005 @ 02:45pm


	u seem nice and i like your stories i thought they were creative u seem nice and im glad that u werent mean to the person who said they wrote better storie than you Do you want to be a writer. If so i think u will make a great one biggrin write back plese

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Commented on: Sun Jun 05, 2005 @ 11:03pm


	please be my friend

Commented on: Sun Jun 05, 2005 @ 11:52pm


	who u asken 2 be yourfriend

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Commented on: Mon Jun 06, 2005 @ 10:19am


	Thanks for the comments, girls. 3nodding

Commented on: Mon Jun 06, 2005 @ 03:47pm


	Cryostix & leeaa 3nodding

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Commented on: Mon Jun 06, 2005 @ 06:19pm


	hey im new here wats up rolleyes Ill b on every wed at ermmmmmmmm i dont no n monday at this time so keep a look out 4 me cool diary smile

Commented on: Sat Jun 25, 2005 @ 05:40pm


	Hey Skoobiegal do u want to be my friend?

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