i'm going to add a poem i wrote cause the ppl on myspace seemed to like it, so here
a World of Grey...
spiraling down toward an unknown destination, fearing the break at the end of the fall.
wandering aimlessly in the b***h black night even in day i cant see the light.
like a bird caged by its own insecurity never knowing if it will fall or fly.
eyes died red mouth lost for word i feel my mind spinning out of control.
in a chaotic world full of hate and war it's easy to be swept under,
when the cry of the damned rages loud and clear don't be lost to their thunder.
for the way we feel, and the way we fall, and our hearts that turn to stone,
unfreeze the cold and break the chains to remove our masks of lies,
cause when all ends you'll find yourself a face in a world of grey.
... so what did you think?
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ah! i got blood in my eyes again!
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it isnt like the stuff we read in english were there is too much meaning.
it was easier to read and understand, for me anyway.
and it makes sense if/when you think about it