He just sits there...;
On top of the luscious green hill.
He sits there...
He just sits there...;
Waiting for the tide.
The tide, the tide;
signaling the return,
the return of the girl;
the return of the girl whom he love's.
He gazes down at the flowing liquid and sighs;his head hung down low.
He wishes;
just wishes for her to return.
Minutes turn into hours.
Hours turn into days.
She does not return to him...;
return to him she does not.
Drying his tears, he stands with his head down low.
When he raises it, his lips bump into hers.
They share a passionate kiss or tears.
They exchange three words.
The Roaring liquid soon drowned out all sound.
Time stood still; so still
In their world of love.
Their pain has ended now,
they've been united.
It's all over.
It's all over.
They sit there...
They just sit there...
On top of the luscious green hill.
The tide, the tide;
The tide will signal it.
Signaling the birth...
They just sit there...
(Copyright: InuokoSalent)
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I came up with this poem pretty easily. I was just sitting on the couch, and I let my mind wander. I try to never, no matter what i'm doing, to not write a poem when I feel this certain...inspiration out of the blue. I'm not saying that i'm good at poems; that's based on opinion. My opinion is that anyone who has the guts to write a poem and put it online or any public place to be viewed is good enough at writing poetry. Poetry is not something complicated; it's writing down your thoughts and feelings compacted to be shared with others. Why hide what is beautiful?
Anyway, don't steal that last line, i'm going to use it for another poem I think (I feel a little inspired now XP) Oh, and don't steal my poems. Linking back is fine, but make sure you include my copyright at the bottom. Give credit where credit is due please.
The hardest part of this poem was coming up with a title. I usually do that last. I'm not completely happy with my title, but I think it's rather fitting, no? And I proofread my poem; everything is there on purpose, including the "love's" if you noticed that. Even the certain colored words and the different font styles; bold, italic. All done on purpose, so don't say "Hey, you made a mistake-" No, I didn't. That's how I felt inside. That's how I want it to be. A Poem can be written whichever way you think best. Write it backwards or upside down or every which-way. It's a poem.