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okay the beginning of one of my story's, i know its rubbish.
People comment help wanted.
also people to not take it and call it your own. i hate plagiarism .


Chapter 1 introduction

I see myself walking along a narrow path surrounded by overgrowing plants and trees. My heart beat was rapidly rising I didn’t quite know what was happening. I looked up to the up lit stars and moved forward, I couldn’t stop myself, curiosity had gotten the better of me. The gentle breeze of the wind seamed surreal, as the trees loomed over me I felt are slight sense of insecurity. The path got narrower and narrower I could barely see a few meters in front of me. I was becoming light headed, my eyes were becoming blurry and it was getting hard to see at all.
Finally I was out. I sighed with relief then turned around, it was a forest, long and narrow. I turned back around so I was facing the way I was walking, I looked up and waited a moment for my eyes to adjust to my surroundings and to my surprise I found myself standing in front of a eerie looking tower. Something that you would find in a horror movie with ivy growing up the walls and bats flying around the tower top. What should I do? I took one step and stopped I didn’t want to go but my body had a mind of its own. I walked onwards up the tower, the walls were dim and damp it had a scary feeling to it like something happened there. The steps were old and ragged as if no one had visited the tower for many years, I had to walk carefully just in case one of the old steps broke I was nearly at the top. I could see a faint beam of light, there was a small window near the edge, I slowly waked along the hall of the tower holding onto the wall. The window over looked the dense forest, I looked up, the bright colour of the moon lit up the dark sky and shined happily everywhere at night even through hard times.
I felt a sudden chill down my neck like something was behind me. I was starting to panic, I turned around slowly, a cold chill of wind filled the air I looked around. I was standing in a field covered in snow. I started to run under the moon light hoping that this wasn’t happening it was too weird. I slipped and tripped on the freezing ice, my eyes were still blurry from before but the snow, it looked a blackish red colour. Like blood had been spread. I went silent, I was so afraid my body was frozen, I wanted to leave from this place to disappear. I felt my body go numb. I couldn’t do anything, I just lay there. I closed my eyes, Everything went black………



It seemed so real, But a dreams a dream…………Or is it?