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Welcome To My life, My world, And My heart.
I Love to write poems.. I am really not that good. I just want some feedback on these. I write when everything in my world is turned upside down. So some of these are a little depressing. lol. Comments please!
Don't you??
Don’t you see me???Staring at you with my deep blue eyes…
Don’t you even care that I cry myself to sleep every night…
Don’t you know that when you smile for a second you make me smile all day…
Don’t you know that I melt in my seat when you flip your hair a special way…
Don’t you realize That I think about you all day long…
That I can’t take my mind off of you…
That You might be the only reason I am still here today…
That I know we are meant to be…
That I can’t wait forever..
But If I like you like I say I do…
I will wait on you till your ready…


Controls.{ a Poem By Stardust113}
Controls.

She wishes she could be free.
Free to walk on her own.
But the strings that control her every move,
Makes her feel like a puppet.
This thing that controls her won't let her go.
She dreams for the day that she could just fly away.
But she could never do so because she will never have wings.
She stumbles as she walks through this unknown world.
She prays for something to cut the strings away.
All she wants is to be free,
But She feels like she will never see that day


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