i no i've been on this website for a while and i'm finally putting someting in my journal. yea i no it took me long enough but i want some feed back on this poem i wrote.
Crickets playing natures song
On a summer night
Fairies laying in thier beds
Under the star light
Through the blackened clouds
That harvest moon is shining bright
And i'll be in my room
Dreaming of you tonight heart
soooo.. wat do u guys think?
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Dragons Of Flames (personal)
im gonna b putting my poetry in here so if u think its ne good tell me. i'll also b writing wat i think and wats going on im my life too.
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