For my English class, I had to write some poetry. This one I came up with during my marine bio class...lol...and I want helpful criticism because I want to make my writing better! Thankies to all!
Wings of Night
Soaring on the wings of night
Enjoying the pure sense of amazing flight
Feathers whisper in my ear
Telling me there is naught to fear
Soaring on the wings of night
Allowing fear to go without a fight
Body as light as a feather
Breathing in the scent of heather
Soaring on the wings of night
Knowing that I must return to earth by light
Mind is racing from the dazzling sight
Watching from my impetuous height.
Soaring on the wings of night
Enjoying the pure sense of amazing flight
Feathers whisper in my ear
Telling me there is naught to fear
Soaring on the wings of night
Allowing fear to go without a fight
Body as light as a feather
Breathing in the scent of heather
Soaring on the wings of night
Knowing that I must return to earth by light
Mind is racing from the dazzling sight
Watching from my impetuous height.
