Backstory:
Art History Outline was due to day (didn't have to be the final draft)
Required to go the writing lab to get a note that said i had been there and they had looked over it and okayed it.
Now:
I went in and waited for someone to be free. Finally, one of the helpers was ready.
I showed her the outline and told her it didn't have to be perfect yet.
She proceeds to tell me that my thesis is all wrong...(adjust this adjust that...and so one) Ok i can handle that. Next, she looks through my outline and tell me that i shouldn't write my bullets like senteces, with some other bullets she tell me to elaborate more!
(ok...GREAt thanks for your help...)
"Why do you have your concultion on here?"
It was on the 'freakin' outline my teacher gave me you b***h...
and so on...
I basically shut-down at that point. She could understand why i wouldn't accept or respond to her suggestion. Oh and get this. This is what she wrote on my note for my teacher:
Quote:
Tried to give comments on form of an outline- and what a thesis statment might be.
Don't know if she's receptive in my thoughts WTF what right does she have to tell my teacher if i am responding to her bitchn' thoughts or statments?!!
It was a requirement that we had to go.
I pulled this outline out of my butt last night to fill the requirements of the class.
I thanked her for her thoughts and left.
*The note and her attitude was a blow to my ego.. (right in the stomach)
i felt so depressed after that...
she can take her comments and go to hell.
(VENTS)
scream scream 
Essay · Fri Mar 04, 2005 @ 05:02pm · 1 Comments
