This is my newest poem...in my opinion it's much better than the first. Please tell me what you think 3nodding
Deep Crimson Earth
Blood splatters against the wall
And soaks into the ground
They all know that they will fall
So why are they still bound
All the tears of despair they cry
In a dark and stoney place
With no one to tell them why or how
Or to wipe the tears from their face
Deep in the darkest abyss of their hearts
Like the midnight ocean cold and black
They know they will be torn apart
They know they can never go back
Their hope has been stained deep crimson red
Like the blood that now covers the earth
Knowing all of their dreams are dead
Still waiting for a new birth
Through the slaughter smoke and fire
Through the ashes and the flames
Will they be given the hope they desire
Or will their spirits be reclaimed
Finding their stregnth they continue to fight
Denying their defeat and the death that awaits
Into the depths of the starry night
Weary but they refuse to yield to their hate
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