A couple parts of my story so far.. tell me how it is? plz&thxx (:
"Wow!" Sylvia explained. "Its so pretty! All this snow..!" Sylvia was astonished, as jacob took her hand ever so lightly, "When i saw it, i immidiately thought of you!" jacobs smile got even brighter when he saw how big sylvias eyes were. *BEEEEEEEEP* sylvia suddenly awoke from her dream, not realizing she had fallen asleep in jacobs lap. "oh- well hi?" jacob had thought that he had woken her up. "did i wake you?" sylvia thought that she heard her phone go off. "I could have sworn that someone was ca-*BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP*ing.. OH s**t" sylvia shot up out of jacobs lap an looked at her phone. ' .. uncle ' her uncle was always hitting her when she didnt answer her phone. "h-hello?!" sylvias voice was was cracking. "where in the HELL are you?!"
on the ride home, jacob was talking to sylvia. "i hate that now, when we try to hang out, your uncle or whatever always calls! its seriously a bunch of bullshit." Sylvias mind was obviously somewhere else, because she was looking outside, worried about what her uncle was gonna do to her this time. she suddenly remembered what happened last time.. All the pain, screaming, aching came back.She covered her stomach, which was now turning queasy. "ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME SYLVIA?!" "Please! Dont talk to me like that.. I dont like i-" jacob got really angry now. "YOU dont like it!? I dont like that we cant spend time together!" Suddenly, they came to a stop and they were at sylvias home. "Im sorry.. But.." "But what jake?!" Jacob got a sorrowed look on his face, as sylvia opened the door, shut it, and jacob rolled down the window. "What is it jake?" "I think we're done.." sylvia couldnt believe what she was hearing." Whatever. TAKE YOUR ******** KEYS TOO." Sylvia threw jacobs house keys at his face, then stormed into the house. "SYLVIA?!"
I still have to write chaper 3 hahhahahhah
jennthetiger · Sat Dec 11, 2010 @ 05:46am · 0 Comments |