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This is a pretty crap "poem", yes, the quotation marks are to indicate sarcasm, well done.

Rhythm dances on the tongues of the innocent,
their lives fly past in a flurry of neon lights and stray beats,
we laugh at their misfortunes,
secretly securing ourself against their failures,
your tongue flicks across your lips,
tasting the dark, musky scent of smoke.
Your heart screams out for help,
but you ignore
the flames lick the blood that falls in droplets.
Pretend you’re just fine,
feeling better yet, sweetie?
You can’t take this any more,
are you ready to fall?
Are you ready to lose it all?
Love is a two-way street,
don’t underestimate the turmoil of loneliness and neglect
by none other than the one you called Everything.



Poetry Attempts.
Helloooo,
I attempted poetry, and it'd be great if I could get your opinions on it. Please go here. Thanks!
Here's a taster... dun dun duuuuuuuuun [yeah, I am just too cool]:
What I did to you.
A stale scent hangs upon an autumn breeze,
caressing my tongue and nostrils with groping fingers,
each second passes, and another tear falls.
I taste each breath, I feel each shudder,
I heard you loved him,
Did you know that I loved him too?
Till his very last breath, I was the only one in his eyes,
Does that kill you the way you killed him?
Oh, I hope that one day it will be your blood
- upon my hands, washing his from my pores.

Dry amusement, a stray skipped heartbeat,
that’s all you were to him.
That’s all you are to me.


Paradox:
the way you move;
those lips, I taste your heartbeat in your kiss;
stoic, your eyes don’t twinkle the way they used to;
a dry scent haunts me;
a song is uttered from those lying lips.
Words spoken hold no relevance to those thoughts,
the distance in your light,
your fading love.
I did this to you.

ox
Nicole

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