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hmm...inside are magic! lol! nah, inside are poems, stories, short things about my life...and umm...greetings...
WHEN A BOY MAKES A GIRL JEALOUS.........
A boy liked a girl but wanted
to make
her jealous...

Then one day


things went terribly wrong.


The next few weeks


were like a very sad


song.


He made her jealous


on purpose he tried.


When the girl asked, "Do you love her?"


on purpose he lied.


He played with jealousy


like it was a game.


Little did he know


Things would never be the same.


His plan was working


but he had no clue.


How wrong things would go,


the damage he would do.


One night she broke down,


feeling very


alone.


Just her and the blade,


no one else home.


She dialed his number,


he answered, "Hello"


She told him she loved him


and hung up the phone.


He raced to her


house


just a minute too late.


Found her lying in blood


her heart


had no rate.


Beside her was a note,


in it her confession.


Her love for this boy,


her only obsession.


As he read the note,


he knelt down and cried.


Grabbed her knife,


that night they both died.


She was found in his arms,


both of them dead.


Under her


note


his handwriting said:


"I loved her so, she never knew.


All this time She loved me too."






User Comments: [6] [add]
theboss12342
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 08:44am
I LOVE U crying


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 08:48am
i know this story already...i have this in my blog at friendster...



Sweet Serene
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Maniacal Fetus
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 09:03am
wow...thats deep...


commentCommented on: Thu May 10, 2007 @ 01:09am
crying cry



xxJ u s t K i d d i n gxx
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NIGROSNIGROSNIGROS
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commentCommented on: Sat May 12, 2007 @ 12:27am
crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying
so sad...I


commentCommented on: Tue May 22, 2007 @ 04:15am
I have a feeling I've heard of this before...*shrugs*
Oh..well..

Nice story though Tragic. 3nodding



Kai Ichabod
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