k guys, this is a poem that I had to wirte for english and I thought I'd put it up here. I want you to leave comments but be completely and tottaly honest about this poem. So if you think it's really that bad, then tell me. If you think it's really that good, then tell me. well here it is, my poem called:
Summer storm
The storm on this summer's eve,
Is worse then that of a hallow's eve.
For my heart is full of dark,
As the sweet, sweet owl fly's from Noah's ark.
Someone, come and save me,
From this chinese angelica tree.
For my heart is full of grief,
As a droplet of water falls from a leaf.
What's that I hear?
Is it the running of a deer,
The hoot of an owl or the cry of a bear?
No, just the sound of the calm air,
Rustling the leaves.
For the storm on this summer night,
Is even worse then a good hallows eve fright.
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