Oh well.
Today in LA we had to write poems about feelings and since I think they suck, I want to see if everyone else thinks so! We had to do haikus and cinquains. Here they are -
Depression
Sitting alone in
a desolate room
waiting for someone to help.
Hope
A shine of light
in the pits of despair, a
feeling all is not lost. Dream of
a child
Love
sweet, sincere
skipping, dreaming, hoping
head in the clouds
happiness
Betrayal
The sting of a
friend hurting you for their own
gain, tossing you aside like a
old toy.
Sorrow
Helplessly drifting
into depression you wait
for death to save you.
Hate
The tug of your Soul
when you see her, you feel need
to rip hers apart.
Sitting alone in
a desolate room
waiting for someone to help.
Hope
A shine of light
in the pits of despair, a
feeling all is not lost. Dream of
a child
Love
sweet, sincere
skipping, dreaming, hoping
head in the clouds
happiness
Betrayal
The sting of a
friend hurting you for their own
gain, tossing you aside like a
old toy.
Sorrow
Helplessly drifting
into depression you wait
for death to save you.
Hate
The tug of your Soul
when you see her, you feel need
to rip hers apart.
Comment on what you think of them!
