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Panic's Bootiful Poetry
Basically this is filled with some of my best poems and writings.
I wish we could back to the days,

when things weren't so complicated.

Before boys ruled our life,

and we could play with dolls.

Back to times when we didn't know about war,

or the birds and the bees.

Back before we cried over broken hearts,

but instead cried for a new doll.

I wish we could go back to the days,

before I cried myself to sleep,

before I regreted the past,

before I had to be cool,

or dress nice.

Back when I could run around in boy's clothes and climb

trees.

Back when santa was real to us.

The only thing that hasn't changed,

is the ability to have big dreams,

and to love.


Panicey
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  • User Comments: [5]
    not sure if you want comments on here since i will be the first for this poem but it is going to be a good comment i like this poem the olny thing i would take out is the
    "or dress nice" part and "and to love" so it would be like... (also added a lilttle different ending to it and if your going to start with 'we' as you topic stay with it instead of going out with like ' before I had to be cool' instead 'before we had to be cool" wink

    'I wish we could back to the days,

    when things weren't so complicated.

    Before boys ruled our life,

    and we could play with dolls.

    Back to times when we didn't know about war,

    or the birds and the bees.

    Back before we cried over broken hearts,

    but instead cried cause we stubbed our toe,

    I wish we could go back to the days,

    before we cried ourselfs to sleep,

    before we regreted the past,

    and before we had to be cool,


    Back when we could run around in boy's clothes and climb

    trees.

    Back when santa was real to us.

    from back then the only thing that hasn't changed,

    is the ability to hope that our dreams

    will come true'

    but over all 4. out of 5 stars!

    comment luckyducky421_ · Community Member · Wed May 23, 2007 @ 03:15am
    I love this poem Dani.
    It describes the mind of a teenage girl perfectly.
    I bet during hard times lots of teen girls feel that way.
    I don't think I could ever have written something like this.
    But now I've got inspiration.
    Thank you.
    I love it.
    Love you girly.
    <3
    The Pimptastic Kayla



    k a y l a.
    thirtythree. second account. been here since '04.
    comment kaylafornia · Community Member · Thu Jul 12, 2007 @ 05:45pm
    cry Tis so beautiful

    comment Queenofthewerewolfs · Community Member · Sat Jul 21, 2007 @ 06:08pm
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    comment Panicey · Community Member · Sun Dec 02, 2007 @ 02:06am
    awww

    comment dorihemish · Community Member · Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 05:00am
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