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I wouldn't usally do this, but I;m board:

Drunken Heart

We've just come back from a party
I walk into my room an claspe on the bed
You follow to make sure I'm ok
You trip over your own feet, an fall on me
We stare in each others eyes
You bend down our lips barly toch when I turn my head,
And you kiss my neck.
"What's wrong?" you ask
I reply, "I love you but... but"
"But, what?" You get up and you're so angry I dare not look at you
I go lay under my covers
You say sorry, an you lay under the covers with me
You hold me,
You kiss me,
You that you love me
A tar runs down my cheek and
I say, "i love you too ____"
My heart drunken, for I'm not my self around you
I'm diffrent, and I don't know what to talk about around you
For all I can say is,
Is that I love you.

Really really bad poem, and very little people I'm sure know who's name goes in there, so please tell me how bad this is.

Anthonys comment, boy from schhol: "Really deep"
That's in short term crying

My poetry sucks!!!

Please tell me how bad my poetry is.

Please comment ^_^ *peace* *heart*

I know I accidently miss spelled, but O' well