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part 2 do you Sobbing on the ground, he kicks her again, struggling to get up, fighting the pain, blood everywhere, feeble, helpless. Her heart throbbing, acheing with anguish, crying silently, tears fall, he laugh as he pushes her around, falling into a never ending nightmare. In a dark room, filled with depression, a internery of hatered overwelms her, slowly breathing, gasping for her life. She hears him laughing, terrorized by the thoughts of him, darkness grows as her heart bleeds, it all seemed so docil, not no more. Forbidden to do anything, screaming in her sleeps, blood drips from her noise, eyes black and blue. can't take no more, can't escape the pain, hatred, holding a shattered heart, that is empty nothing in it. Her soul is gone, nothing seems worth living, to be beaten everyday, by the man she thought she loved.

Posted by: Ravens_Inner_Soul Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 04:52pm

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Commented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 05:26pm


	WOW another powerful poem great poem and sad part is this thing is really going on around the world i just hope it doesnt happen to u or any other friends again great poem

Commented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 05:28pm


	thank you, and I wouldn't let that happen to me nor to any of my friends

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Commented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 05:31pm


	thats good just be strong

Commented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 05:40pm


	sure is can't be weak for a moment these days or someone will try and pull something

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Commented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 11:14pm


	Very powerful. Another one of your poems that shows how screwed up the world is. What makes abuseive men think they have the right to do that!?

Commented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 11:37pm


	You know it Bob!!!!!!!

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Commented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 11:40pm


	nodds Its very upsetting!

Commented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 11:46pm


	but some women just are so scared and do the wrong thing

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Commented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 11:53pm


	I know. They just don't know what to do to save themselfs..and they tell themselfs that they're still in love... sad Its so uncool

Commented on: Wed Mar 21, 2007 @ 03:55pm


	sad ya I know and it is sad

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Commented on: Wed Mar 21, 2007 @ 06:48pm


	Yeah really sad...

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