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My stories and poems and random things!!!!!!
I have sooo many ideas in my head and i need to write them down but i keep starting new ones everytime i work on one story!!! i am going to be posting a few stories here and there but not a lot....
poem...
yes, my poems are HORRID but i made this poem cuz i felt like it...

DESPAIR

Sadness drowned me
like a river running through thee
Living in my own despair
hiding from the own sun's glare

My own thoughs exploded
while other people gloaded
Glowing blue without a clue
this feeling had felt so new

Without a thought, without a trace
something bloomed from a sprouting grace
It shone through this grief
arriving like a new grown leaf

It came to me across the land
bending down with an outstretched hand
Pulling me out of this terror
showing me a face that's fairer
Teaching me not to care
about that old despair...

leave comments telling me how i did...


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  • User Comments: [2]
    This is pretty good. you did pretty well, but your not as good as me!!!! lol, your still awesome!!!

    comment Turning my back on things · Community Member · Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 04:48am
    OMG I love it!!!!(I think your better at it than your bf) ^^.But I really do like It.I got my poem published in a book when I was in third grade.It is so stupid....everyone can write better than me*sniff*

    comment Kairi659 · Community Member · Sat Mar 24, 2007 @ 05:33am
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