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READ WHAT I WROTE!!!n_n
I have recently tried writing songs! Some are pretty good! Also, I may write stuff about my day or if something is bugging me or if I have a problem, so READ UP!
I WROTE THIS SONG!!
its my first completed song so goes easy on the criticism...and the spelling!
It Happens by PuddinPop

Look at my smile, its so fake.
You think Im happy, thats a big mistake.
I'll be single, by myself,
Like an old dusty book on a little broken shelf.
Those five words haunt my dreams,
"It wasn't meant to be" makes me scream.
I'm sorry I lied about what I said,
I'll never be okay, I wish I was dead.
I won't kill myself, that'd kill you,
I guess I'll be happy when life's through.

Why did it have to be this way?
I guess I can't make you stay.
I just wish there was some other way.
Well, I guess it happens.

I thought I had a chance, I didn't know,
How much you loved her so.
Well, it just occured to me,
I guess it really wasn't meant to be.
That's okay, I'll go on,
I'll go through life, singing this song:

Why did it have to be this way?
I guess I can't make you stay
I just wish there was some other way
Well, I guess it happens

Why did it have to be this way?
I guess I can't make you stay
I just wish there was some other way
Well, I guess it happens

I'll find someone else
Who wants to be mine
That's just what I'll find
That's just what I'll find

Why did it have to be this way?
I guess I can't make you stay
I just wish there was some other way
Well, I guess it happens

I'll remember you,
After all that we've been through.
But I beg of you,
Remember me, too.


LollipopPrincess916
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  • User Comments: [5]
    sad song

    comment haunted4u17 · Community Member · Thu Mar 29, 2007 @ 10:34pm
    omg ur so good at that!! i wish i cd write songs like that, i can only sing them, and it is a very sad song. stare

    comment Lucky Ducky 63 · Community Member · Fri Apr 06, 2007 @ 01:47pm
    hey nice journal burning_eyes

    comment jimsally3 · Community Member · Sat May 12, 2007 @ 12:58am
    Impressive kid.I always knew you had a way with words, I just wish they weren't so sad. Either way though, keep on writing and perfect your style and you'll be on your way to being a true musician.

    Good luck kid,
    Artist in the Ambulance

    comment AlexAverice · Community Member · Fri Jun 22, 2007 @ 10:22pm
    omg, that was ah-mazing! your really good. i cant write them or sing them, so yeah... but it was really sad, but i loved it!

    comment beah 5 · Community Member · Sun Jul 08, 2007 @ 08:48pm
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