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life Everything, everyone, time Things are going slow motion, heart beating faster. people dieing, children living on the streets, drugs dealers on every corner, this is what life has come too. Having to worry about what I do, can't walk down the street, without worring, without thinking will I be safe. Bang,someone been shot, women screaming, because they have been raped, or about to be killed. This isn't what should be happening, but who cares what does a child know, we don't know. Wrong, we know, some of us lived it, seen it, knows how it is. Fights breaking out, abusing, car crashes, people who don't care, but care for them self. Selfish people like that, who causes other people, to get hurt, pain, and tears. Everyday on the news, a crime has happen, people just being careless. a flame burstes into me, knowing this happening, and most people just don't care. Some laugh at it, enjoy seeing other people in pain, or doesn't evne want to listen. everynight, I hear a ambulence wahmbulance , hear the cops chasing down someone, shooting goin on. Life, this is what is happening, everyday, and night, do care, because it could be you.

Posted by: Ravens_Inner_Soul Sun Mar 11, 2007 @ 08:30pm

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Commented on: Sun Mar 11, 2007 @ 08:38pm


	Too true... What has this world come to? It's so screwed up.. so very wrong... I once wrote an essay for a contest about how screwed up our country is, and that the first step to the world being better is if we actually care enought to try and make it better. Why don't people care? Were all brothers in sisters according to the bible. These are our family we watch die, our family we watch make others die... Its so so so wrong...

Commented on: Sun Mar 11, 2007 @ 08:52pm


	I agree it makes me mad

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Commented on: Sun Mar 11, 2007 @ 08:53pm


	Yeah and sad

Commented on: Sun Mar 11, 2007 @ 09:34pm


	oh wow this poem is so true i remember the good old days where u can be outside at like 2am and not be afraid of anyone now u gotta look out for urself at 2pm good job writing this poem when i was reading it i was just saying wow this is really happening

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Commented on: Sun Mar 11, 2007 @ 10:06pm


	it is very sad, and i hate knowing that it is true

Commented on: Mon Mar 12, 2007 @ 12:08am


	I know thats the worst part.. Like when you see a really sad movie where something terrible happens you know its ok because its all fake and noone was really hurt.. Then you watch the news.. And its not ok because someone really did get hurt and terrible things really did happen...

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Commented on: Mon Mar 12, 2007 @ 02:33am


	exactly bob sad

Commented on: Mon Mar 12, 2007 @ 09:52pm


	sad cry

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Commented on: Mon Mar 12, 2007 @ 10:16pm


	well at least there is people who do care, for the most part

Commented on: Mon Mar 12, 2007 @ 11:14pm


	True. If there weren't even a single kind soul out there this world would be far worse

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Commented on: Tue Mar 13, 2007 @ 12:08am


	what if I was "shift eyes" was like that :O lol that would never happened

Commented on: Tue Mar 13, 2007 @ 12:28am


	XD Well your not and thats what matters.

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Commented on: Tue Mar 13, 2007 @ 12:58am


	pokes bob> smile well I am now lol jk Bob lol I was bored lol just wanted to tease

Commented on: Tue Mar 13, 2007 @ 08:46pm


	pokes Fred back lol When people get bored it leads to strange things.....

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Commented on: Wed Mar 14, 2007 @ 01:06am


	hee hee heeeee

Commented on: Wed Mar 14, 2007 @ 01:14am


	biggrin

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