ok, this is the begenning of a story, tell me if you like it
hi, my name is naomi brown and i can see peoples shadows. now, i know what your thinking"so? i can see shadows too!" but those are not the shadows im talking about. im talking about the shadows that envelope your mind, body, and soul. the shadows that delve inside your thoughts and find everything that youve done wrong in your life. every person you've slain, every lie you're told, and every lover you've cheated on.these shadows grow darker withevery sin and lighten every time you do a good deed. these shadows are projections of your soul. the mind finds the projection and pulls all but a peice of it back into the soul. i say all but a peice because the body cannot hold all of the evil. the small peice that is left behind is what i see. to try to cover the place where the real shadow is the mind sends out its own projection and that is what you all see. i have seen the shadow since i was little, and this is my story
dont worry, im not a freak, this is all made up, but i want to be a writer, please tell me how you think it is!! i need more opinions than my familys, who all say its great because im the baby of the family and they want to be nice to the "baby"
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