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SUGAR, yummy, SUGAR
Um, Sugar, Sugar, and Sugar rule the word
I dont know
any more
the fear
it over whilems
and conquers the mind
leaving no room
for any thought
for you see
nothing
for my energy
my mutureity
isnt there
a sheleter
I realse
it isnt needed
when I am safe
for I know
walls must be bilt
ones of trust
for the ones I love
for w/out them
so let me be
my childish self
for I let u see me
that way
I play coy
but dont let it
trick u
I know more
then I want to
so let me keep
my dark emotions
hidden
for scare you
they may
but let me talk
when I wish
to just be seris
for once
I dont want to
be the one
in contorl
when I have no control






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cain yuki
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 07, 2007 @ 12:47pm
this is a very awesome poem you are a good writer


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 08, 2007 @ 03:34pm
love your poem ^^ you're indeed a good writer blaugh



ti_amo_remember
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Comic Tragedy
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 14, 2007 @ 04:24pm
humm...very interesting...a good piece of work...intelegent...whats the thoughts and feelings behind it? I can feel the emotion but what emotion is it? heh heh sweatdrop so i ask to many questions


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 23, 2007 @ 01:39am
u r really good at poetry heart heart crying crying crying crying redface 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding



Sasuke_menichie
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tifa_lockheart_995
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 07, 2008 @ 08:17pm
omg...ur a really good poet...u remind me of my friend...he thought the same way...


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 18, 2008 @ 10:36pm
Everyone has a secret you've shown this one well in your writting



Shizuka_rain
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