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Random stuff that leaks out of my head of thoughts.
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Chapter two.
Yay!! finished chapter 2, enjoy!

~Chapter two~


Hatsuko ran so fast that she crashed into another person. She began crying hard while trying to hold it in. The person grabbed her arm and tried pulling her up but she yanked her arm back and tried to escape but instead when she stood up her legs gave away and fell back on the ground. She started sobbing and couldn’t see anything because tears were falling out of her eyes causing her sight to be blurry. What she did see, was a hand reaching out towards her face and wiping her tears away with a handkerchief. Hatsuko looked up to see the person and was surprised to see Aoshi again.

“Wah!!! Aoshi!?” Hatsuko said but felt a sting in her chest and started to cry again. “Huh? Wait what’s wrong?” Panics Aoshi as he sees Hatsuko starting to cry again. “…*Sniff* my boyfriend…I saw him with another girl and-*Hic*” She couldn’t speak anymore before she started to cry again. “What?! Your boyfriend?” Aoshi’s tone went from a gentle worry to a dangerous fury. And as if right on cue, Yoshi came running towards them. As soon as he sees Hatsuko, he walks up to her ready to grab her and drag her away but before he does a fist comes out of nowhere and nails him straight him in the face.

“Ow! What the f-huh?” Yoshi clutched his face but stops talking when he sees who delivered the blow. “Tsk, your face is as hard and as heavy as the amount of s**t you have in your head.” Said Aoshi shaking his hand a little to make the pain go away. Aoshi then walks up to Yoshi and grabs his shirt collar. “Where do you get off at cheating on your girlfriend?!” “Huh?” Yoshi acts innocent until he sees Hatsuko crying on the ground. “Oh…that, I’m so sorry Hatsuko…it’s just, well you and I didn’t really communicate very well and you were always nervous around me, I got bored.” Hatsuko looks up at Yoshi and startled, sees him crying as well. “I’m sorry.” He says then runs off. Hatsuko just sits there watching him run off. I never thought that a festival could bring such pain to one person…but as every Manga starts off, this is just the beginning of my story.

~End chapter~


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  • User Comments: [7]
    OMG!! good good!! though it kind of sucks how you cut it off!! the suspense!! but that just wants you to want to read it more!! crying

    comment canineforgive · Community Member · Sun Feb 18, 2007 @ 08:38pm
    Yay thanks.

    comment ShaiMouse · Community Member · Sun Feb 18, 2007 @ 08:43pm
    yay mai!

    comment Esperanto · Community Member · Mon Feb 19, 2007 @ 08:47am
    its awshums sorry i didnt comment earlier but i didnt know what to write lol sweatdrop

    comment DarkTwilightMaster · Community Member · Tue Feb 20, 2007 @ 01:48am
    its awesome Mai!!^^ I want to read more! Yay!! whee The suspense is killing me

    comment (_Tomiko-chan_) · Community Member · Tue Feb 20, 2007 @ 02:30am
    hey.that was very good.you should really continue making this story.

    comment laharol · Community Member · Tue Feb 20, 2007 @ 03:36am
    i wanna read more! curse the suspence!! crying

    comment Akuma Bakudan · Community Member · Tue Feb 20, 2007 @ 06:44am
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