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yay!!! i've decided to make a new manga here's the first chapter tell me what you think.
Lantern Festival

“Yay! We’re going to the lantern festival!!!” Hatsuko says as she jumped around hyperly. “Yeah, yeah, whatever…” said Yoshi. “ I just came here to watch the concert.” “ Yes of course.” Said Hatsuko remembering why she was there in the first place. Me, Hatsuko Namamoto, ( 16) and my boyfriend, Yoshiaki Tanaka, (also 16) came to the annual lantern festival so we could see our favorite band, The Red Cross perform. But what I didn’t know was that something bad would take place after the concert. This is where my story starts.

“Um, I’m going to go to the bathroom!!!” yells Hatsuko over the raging crowd to Yoshi. “Yeah, yeah, sure.” Mumbles Yoshi and waves Hatsuko off. When she gets out of the bathroom the concert is already over but ends up lost at the festival. “Oh no… help someone I’m lost!” Hatsuko asks the people around her. “Oomph!!!” Hatsuko bumps into someone and falls to the ground with a small “Ow!” . “ Oh I’m sorry there.” Says the person who bumped into her. “ No, no, it was my fault for not watching where I was going.” She looks up and gawks. She was looking at the face of the band leader of The Red Cross, Aoshi Hataka. “ Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! I’m so sorry!!!” Hatsuko starts blushing and getting embarrassed while trying to apologize to Aoshi. “No problem.” He smiles and helps Hatsuko up. “Um…I’m lost so can you point me in the direction of the West Gates?” “ Sure, it’s that way.” Points Aoshi in the opposite direction. “Hey you okay, Aoshi?” Asks one of his band mates as Hatsuko runs off. “It’s nothing, it’s just she was kind of cute.” , mumbles Aoshi.

“ Where is Yoshi-kun?” wonders Hatsuko as she arrives at the West Gate. She looks around and spots Yoshi and runs towards him but immediately stops as she sees another girl with him…kissing him. “Huh? What’s Yoshi-kun doing with another girl?” wonders Hatsuko but instead Yoshi looks up sees her and starts walking towards her. Startled that he would yell at her, Hatsuko turns and runs in the opposite direction with Yoshi quick on her heels. She runs so fast that she couldn’t quit stop herself in time before she crashed into another person.

End Chapter
And i also found out that the guy on heros that plays Hiro Nakamura or Masi Oka's birthday is december 27!!! one day apart from mine but different years of course!!!