Okay. So this is just
one of my dumb writings. :] I am trying to
work on imagery. Tell me how you feel
about it and tell me what needs to be changed.
The air is icy as it dances on my
cheeks. We stand in the midst of trees on our
special path. The snow covers everything in a
beauteous and chilling blanket. The only clue
that leads them to us is the two sets of foot
prints, side by side. In the middle of that
beauty is our own beauty.
And as the breeze continues
to chill. He steps closer, his tall frame beside me.
My hands find his. They are warm and kind. Our
fingers lace. Slowly he moves our paired hands to
his face. His kisses caress my hand before they
find their way to my lips. His tenderness melts the
world. Between the dews of kisses, our faint
"I love you's."
one of my dumb writings. :] I am trying to
work on imagery. Tell me how you feel
about it and tell me what needs to be changed.
The air is icy as it dances on my
cheeks. We stand in the midst of trees on our
special path. The snow covers everything in a
beauteous and chilling blanket. The only clue
that leads them to us is the two sets of foot
prints, side by side. In the middle of that
beauty is our own beauty.
And as the breeze continues
to chill. He steps closer, his tall frame beside me.
My hands find his. They are warm and kind. Our
fingers lace. Slowly he moves our paired hands to
his face. His kisses caress my hand before they
find their way to my lips. His tenderness melts the
world. Between the dews of kisses, our faint
"I love you's."
![Butt[Lips]](https://a1cdn.gaiaonline.com/dress-up/avatar/ava/6c/1f/3f5c6b3c2c1f6c.png?t=1267831951_6.00_00 "Butt[Lips]")
