Love
Love is a word I don't understand. A word with no meaning. A word with no happiness. I felt love. I felt happiness. Now I feel hatred. All girls who get to know love or like me but the girls who doesn't know me or want to get to know run away from me like a freak. Thats what I'm reduced to a freak. I'm nothing but a freak who hangs around people I try to get to know but get rejected. I have no meaning. Love has no meaning. I protect my love but no love is found in me but a light of Hotcocoa. Her life brightens my day and life. But the love is still not powerful enough to darg me from my dark clouds. My love is a meaning protect the ones I love and care even if they don't love me back
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Xac's Devil Nightmare peoms
I write peoms here and there. So I'm trying get people to read them and tell me how it was. I really enjoy writing peoms. Oh by the way if you are reading this, than you know I write dark peoms not happy "sun-shrine" poems. Please enjoy
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Sugar-Coated:
Well, it's not good, but its not bad. Try harder, and I'm sure it will be good. :3
The Truth:
Poems are supposed to express your feelings, not some emo band's feelings. This is unoriginal, uninteresting, and- honestly?- seems to be put on. It reminds me of a sixth-grader writing hate letters in his diary and leaving it where someone can find it, read it, and feel sorry for him. Typical sob story... here's a tip: wait until something that actually qualifies as 'sad' before you go on an emo rant.
Kthnx bi.