Ok how will i start.... confused
(oh and i warn you. i have never been good at the Beginning)
Along time ago there was a place, many light years away from here... This plantet had been in Monarki, rulled by a Queen for almost 20 years now. she was very intellegent and helpful. So no one really cared that she was a woman, until one day then the queen did something that she never would have done...
so what do u think crappy beginning huh confused im not so proud of it either... well i hope it will be better after some time... i hope
"Chapter 2"(this ne is bad 2 when are i'm going to write better )
Pregnancy... She gave birth of a wonderful Girl with Brown eyes...
But in there culture A Queen couldent give birth to a baby unless she had Blue eye, blue reprecents the angels color of there wings and the queen was like a holy Angel sended there by God to protect there land and after some time she will give birth to a new "angel" that will turn the wheel forever, but now then they found out that the color was Brown, they hung the Queen as traitor.
They named her "the Queen that can't be trusted"...
When they were about to hung the Child, she disappeared. No one knows how or when she disappeared. the only thing they new about her was her eyes... she was called "the daugther of the traitor"
...but she was also called the "Blue eyed sorcerer"... And when from that day she became a legend...
But in there culture A Queen couldent give birth to a baby unless she had Blue eye, blue reprecents the angels color of there wings and the queen was like a holy Angel sended there by God to protect there land and after some time she will give birth to a new "angel" that will turn the wheel forever, but now then they found out that the color was Brown, they hung the Queen as traitor.
They named her "the Queen that can't be trusted"...
When they were about to hung the Child, she disappeared. No one knows how or when she disappeared. the only thing they new about her was her eyes... she was called "the daugther of the traitor"
...but she was also called the "Blue eyed sorcerer"... And when from that day she became a legend...
But if she is going to a legend as a good or a evil person i on't know what do u think??
