Tales of Symphonia
Lloyd Irving
Home World: Sylvarant
Weapon: Twin Swords
Fighting Style: Melee
Lloyd is your typical good guy. He's a good person, although he might be sort of a slacker. He doesn't pay attention in school and he normally sleeps during school time. Aside from this, he's a very good swordsman. He wields two swords for double the damage and his agility and skill makes him even more deadly. Lloyd is also the main hero of Tales of Symphonia.
Colette Brunel
Home World: Sylvarant
Weapon: Chakrams (Rings / Discs)
Fighting Style: Angelic Skills and Melee
Colette is an extremely nice person. She even tries to make friends with her assassin, Sheena. Beneath all her kindness is an overwhelming sadness. She knows what must happen to her in order to rejuvenate the world. Her self-sacrifice is what might be causing this depression within herself. She also believes everything is her fault and she apologizes accordingly.
Genis Sage
Home World: Sylvarant
Weapon: Kendama
Fighting Style: Magic Spells
Genis is the smartest person in the entire land of Sylvarant. Since he is so smart, he is also cocky. He believes he's better than everyone else. His intelligence also contributes to his strength in his mana control or magic. If it weren't for his power with magic, he wouldn't be what he is today. Genis is also Lloyd's best friend. His condescending tone makes him a Half-Elf. Even though it's not favorable to mix bloods, it's tolerated in Sylvarant. He's also the brother of Raine Sage.
Raine Sage
Home World: Sylvarant
Weapon: Staves / Rods
Fighting Style: Healing and Magic
Raine is Lloyd's, Genis', and Colette's professor in Iselia. She is also the older sister of Genis. She might be content as some points but, she admires ruins of magitechnology with immense care. She usually goes into "crazy" mode when she encounters magitechnology. She also specializes in the healing arts and the resurrection techniques. Her skills, such as First Aid, Nurse, and Revitalize is what keeps the party staying healthy.
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Serene's Journal
This journal will be a collection of different parts of a story that I will be creating. Some of you might be familiar with the characters and elements of the story. It's because I combined the Yggdra Union world with the Tales of Symphonia world.
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xd Remember, the Thesaurus is your friend--being redundant with words sometimes gets on my nerves. =D Also, you should watch where you put your punctuation. Then again, my Lang/Comp teacher may have taught me differently then what your English teacher taught you.
Since I know these characters, I can comment if they're IC or not. I'm guessing that you've made Presea actually regain some of her emotions back--seeing how she's laughed and all when Sheena called Zelos a show-off. >D If so, then that scene makes sense to me. Everyone else that you mentioned seemed in character (but then again, I haven't played ToS in a long while). Except Raine. She doesn't really seem like the type of person who would say 'Sure Lloyd.' Maybe a slightly stuffy "UF CURZE, LLOYUDD@3" or something like that. ninja That, and she's more of the type to suppress her emotions. That, I know. Except when she's in Ruin mode.
Lawlz, all in all, I think this is pretty good. I'm also glad that you explained why Regal took off his cuffs =D (or I would be all like: "WTF?!323?!" wink Sheena and Zelos can be such idiots sometimes. I WOULD read the next chapter, if only I played Yggdra union. Aw well, I'll be looking forward for your third chapter. Hopefully you continue.
xd Though, what's the plot anyway? ninja Or are you still developing it?
WHY IS THIS REVIEW LONGER THAN KRIS'?!