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.:Broken Hearts:.
A poem, I warn you I'm not a good poet! xp


.:Broken Hearts:.
I'm falling past the stars
Their silver lights casting shadows
Upon the hearts of those searching for the love they desire
Their journey ending
On a road of wasted hope
Their shattered hearts creating pools of blood
Staining my memory
Reminding me of how I've fallen
Into a sea of despair
And here I lay, not breathing
Drowned in your lies
Suffocated in your hate
as death consumes me
I smile at the thought
I'm out of your hands
broken from your grasp
chains have been lifted
yet i still sit here
not talking
plainly alone
fainally set free
away from my killer
the person who i trusted

that killer was you


Sooo how do you like it? Please tell the truth....





.crazy.phsyco.
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    demondevil55
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    commentCommented on: Sat Jan 20, 2007 @ 10:26am
    a poem, I warn you I'm not a good poet! >.< is wat you said rite at least you know how write poems me I dont even know how...eh its look good I like it u puts such good words on it.... 3nodding


    commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 05:04pm
    I like it



    xHana_Angelx
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    commentCommented on: Sun Mar 11, 2007 @ 12:32am
    I thoguht it was pretty good. 3nodding Definately better than me because I suck at writing poems xd


    commentCommented on: Sun Mar 11, 2007 @ 07:44am
    ^^ thanks guys! i don't write poems that often and so far this is the best i've ever wrote..... but it sucks compared to my friend's poems! T______T



    .crazy.phsyco.
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    edonkulator
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    commentCommented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 03:34am
    that was deep wow i envy you teach me xD oh look at my storys n_n tell me if i was good i think ill makem ore


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