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HAWK
My sister's Story Chapter 1
CHAPTER ONE- HEAVENS RAIN

"About time you two were here.I was a little bit worried." Lauren smiled, while leaning up against a crystilia tree. Her arms were crossed over her chest and her red eye glowed menacingly into the night sky.
"Just like Lauren. Always worried." Maletreco stuck out his tongue but playfully punched Lauren in the shoulder. Lauren sighed and took out her flashlight, slightly bonking Maletreco on the top of his head. Sinara rolled her eyes. Maletreco was being childish again. Even Lauren knew all of Maletrecos imature games. Maletreco was ofcourse only 19 while Lauren was 21, so Maletreco still had a little bit of teenager in him while Lauren was full on grownup and ready to live succesfully or so she hoped.
Sushin walked silently over to Sinara and planted a kiss to her cheek. Sushin was 20, only a little bit younger than Lauren but still held a mature personality. Sinara on the other hand was 19 almost 20. The group had not one similarity in apearance. Maletreco has spiky black and red hair and a goofy personality that should really belong to a 12 year old. He has blue eyes , that are so light that they were close to becoming crystal white as the trees. Sinara was a blonde. Her saphire eyes always stood out, something that Sushin really liked about her. She was mature like Lauren but sometimes goofed off every once in a while. Sushin was a blonde as well, his bangs curving over his right eye and dark green eyes that could see through anything.
"No more lovey dovey, more flashy lighty." Maletreco gave a lopsided sneer and flicked Sushin between the eyes. Sinara put a hand to her mouth, giggling. Sushin scowled, but the four of them took out there flashlights, ready to listen to Laurens instructions.
"Crud, mines half dead." Maletreco smacked his flashlight continuelessly in irritation."WORK!" He shouted. Lauren shook her head in disaproval and snatched the flashlight from Maletrecos hands , whether to make it work, or to stop Maletreco from making a fool out of himself. She repowered up the flashlight battery and handed it back to Maletreco. He smiled shyly and turned it on correctly this time. Sushin and Lauren pointed it at the wishing tree and Sinara and Maletreco just followed in example.The tree glowed brightly and everyones eyes went wide from the sure fact of it. It glowed brighter to brighter seemingly becoming a image of the sun except with no heat and radiation. Lauren covered her eyes from the shining glow and stepped back a little bit then suddenly the tree erupted with glow and every tree a mile away from it began to glow with it. Sinara was amazed,dropping her flashlight in shock.
"This is incredible." She said in awe. Maletreco smiled and turned himself around to look at all the trees around him. Sushin placed a hand over his eyes to keep the really bright glare of the tree away, but he didn't succeed. Shining particles rained down on them but so silently. "I don't understand how a fake light can work like this." Sinara looked at Lauren who just sat down, her arms crossing over her chest. Her face showed no emotion and that made Sinara curious. " Lauren?" Sinara walked over to Lauren her hands behind her back. "The Wishing tree was a special bond that all electrogens used to share long ago. We used electricity to light up the trees not flashlights but my electricity is far too weak that I needed you three here to help me. I've heard so many stories...that when the wishing tree was at power other electrogens would see it or feel it and come."Lauren explained, curling her fingers through her ribbon."You think your sister will feel the wishing tree don't you?" Sinara wondered. Sushin glanced at the girls and then just at Lauren who was speechless."...We better get back to the castle before we get caught, besides I need to pack for tomorrows search.."Lauren mumbled, ignoring Sinara's question.
"Just stop looking for that girl, can't you see you'll never find her?" Sushin said through gritted teeth, behind Lauren. Lauren flinched and just walked through the woods. Sushin shook his head and walked after her." Just stop looking for her!" He yelled.
"Sushin just leave her alone." Sinara grabbed hold of Sushin's Mercenary uniform sleeve. He tugged away from her and grabbed hold of Lauren's wrist.
"Just please give up." He mumbled. Lauren hissed and tore her hand away from him.
"NO!" She yelled and ran through the rest of the woods, her footprints the only trace of her left behind. Sinara frowned sadly.Malectreco just stood there, until he finally brought up the courage of running after Lauren through the dark dence woods.
"Your being a jerk you know that?" Sinara said angrily at Sushin. He looked down and crossed his arms.
"She needs to face it someday. She can't keep looking for all eternity. Mavor should have never let that girl into are Castle. She has always been trouble and-"
Sinara cut him off with a swat at the arm.
"Don't you dare finish that sentence Sushin!" She whispered. "How can you be so cold? She's gone through enough and your only worsening the wound." Sinara trembled, feeling completely sad for Lauren. Lauren has been a sister to her for so long and shes also been so close to Sushin for so very long she just didn't expect this from him, towards her. "You have alot to think about," She nodded to Sushin,"And maybe you should apologize to her." She added softly." I'm sorry for hitting you. You just don't seem to get it." Sinara sighed and walked away, hugging her arms together to keep warm. The light particles had softly darkened like ash, leaving Sushin alone and empty.
"I love you..." Sushin called after her, sadness filling up his voice. Sinara froze and turned around one last time. She looked at Sushin and bit her lip.
"Yeah...I love you too." She sighed once more and finally disapeared into the trees.
The sky was so black, the stars seemed to just disapear from space. Sushin sat down and kicked at the dirt."I'm an idiot...a complete idiot."He thought.
A howling wind whipped the long blonde hair strands from his eyes and fluttered his jacket behind him.He stayed seated right at the roots of the wishing tree, digging the tips of his shoes deep into the dirt. He slid his fingers through his hair and finally decided to walk back to the Castle."I need to apologize..."
****~~~*****
"Lauren, wait up!" Maletreco said frantically. Then finally he couldn't take it anymore and sped like a bullet in front of her. She ignored him and just walked around him like he was an easy obstacle such as a tree. " You shouldn't listen to anything he says. You should know that by now after fifteen years of knowing him." Maletreco dug his hands deep into his pockets. Lauren walked behind the Castle gates and found the hung rope she had used to climb down earlier.
"Listen to me!" Malectreco said angrily. Lauren grabbed a knot that was tied onto the rope. There was a tight knot every 5 inches on the rope so it helped to grip onto.
She sighed and pulled herself up the rope one knot at a time, while also climbing her feet up against the wall. Malectreco climbed after her.
"I said listen to me!" Malectreco repeated. A sudden sound of a door closing made Lauren flinch. She froze and held onto the rope as tight as she could.
"Shhh...someones awake." Lauren whispered. Malectreco rolled his eyes.
" Oh so you say something now? Your stubborn you know tha-"
"I said shh!" Lauren hissed. Maletreco mumbled something under his breathe. "Maybe it's Sinara since she's lucky to have had the front of the castle..."Malectreco thought.
"That wouldn't make sense. Maybe its Sinara? uh no. you just thought yourself....she has got the 'front' of the castle." Lauren whispered."Besides I think whoever it was its gone." Lauren added. Maletreco palmed his forehead.
"Quit reading my mind lady!" Malectreco glared. Lauren ignored the comment and went back to climbing the rope.Malectreco was silent for a while until they finally made it to the top reaching the large open window and he began to make a popping sound with his lips. Lauren let go of the rope and kicked off the wall then grabbed the rope once more, swinging herself around it and into the room. Malectreco just swung the rope back and forth, then jumped through the window , landing face first. He jumped to his feet rubbing his forehead.
Lauren ignored his stunt and walked over to her dresser." You can leave now." She mumbled. Malectreco shook his head.
"Nah, I think I'll stay here a while longer." He crossed his arms and leaned up against the wall, next to the nightstand near Laurens bed. A bright blue luminous light cast through the room leaving dark shadows in every corner. Lauren just shrugged and grabbed a brush with hard bristles and stroked it through her long black hair. She then took out the tied up strands of hair on each side of her head. Malectreco yawned and decided to sit on her bed as long as she wouldn't turn around and throw something at him. He looked at her brush out her hair and smiled.Lauren froze and looked at him through the mirror.
"Can you leave now?" She mumbled, her voice sounding a little raspy, almost satanic.
"Nope." Malectreco grinned and lay his arms behind his neck and leaning back on a pillow. Lauren raised an eyebrow. She shrugged once more though, and took off her jacket. Pretending he wasn't there she began to take off all her clothes besides her undergarments and slide into her night clothes. Malectreco had kept his eyes from her and just stared out the window the whole time whistling. He nervously looked at her again and sighed in relief at the fact she was completely dressed now.
"Can you leave....now?" Lauren crossed her arms and walked over to her bed glaring at Malecteco with a gold and a red eye. He bit his lip then smiled to himself.
"What if I don't want to huh?" Malectreco teased. He kept himself comfortably seated while looking at Lauren with a flirtacious smile.
" If you don't leave I'll..."
"You'll what?" Malectreco challenged.And with that, Lauren grabbed a good hold of Malectrecos hair and with all her vampire stength rocketed him into the wall, vibrating the entire room. He gasped out in suprise and yelled in pain. He tryed to get up but sat down, until he suddenly laughed. Lauren raised a eyebrow at him. "You got to be kidding."She thought. She cracked her knuckles and smiled, taking a step at a time towards Malectreco.
***~~~****
Sinara sat on her bed with her head in her hands. "Tonight was rather horrid." She spoke to herself through the crisp air. It was freezing so she stood up and opened the window letting in a nice breeze. Then there was a knock at the door and she walked over to the door and opened it curiously. A six foot man dressed in full black with belts hanging loose off his pants, and wearing combat boots, with a red vampire sign tattooed to his left arm, with black spiked hair and a knitted eyepatch that curved over his right eye, showed up at the door.He looked 19 but was indeed 3002 years old.
" Oh hello father." Sinara mumbled. The vampire smiled and entered the room and sat on Sinaras bed.
"I felt your sadness tell me what is wrong my dear." Mavor put his hands on his lap and looked at Sinara with a concerned expression pasted to his face. His left eye was a crystal blue but as for his right eye, it was scarred after a accident 15 years back during a Dragon vs Vampire war.The dragon mercenary Ledmay had killed the vampire queen Anabella only breaking a large war for centuries to continue. And on that very day he had gotten the scar because he saved Lauren the six year old from a prophecy dragon.
" I don't want to talk about it father," Sinara said sadly, " And it has nothing to concern you."
"Hmm. It's Lauren and Sushin isn't it?" Mavor asked. He had read her mind even if she weren't thinking anything at that very moment. Sinara bit her lip and sat down on the bed next to Mavor. She leaned her head on his shoulder sadly.
" Sushin will apologize and Lauren will leave tommorow morning to set off on her journey. You should join her." Mavor suggested.
"That's foolish. Besides she won't let me come even if I asked." Sinara mumbled. Mavor smiled and looked at her.
"Just ask her. And then Malectreco will want to come and Sushin will too since he desires to be with you every last second of his life. Then she shall be outnumbered and have no choice but to let you come." Mavor patted her back and sat up.
Sinara thought about it and smiled.
"Have some sleep, it's 4:00 in the morning and you have a long day tomorrow. And please stop sneaking out." Mavor chuckled and walked out of the room, closing the door softly behind him. Sinara took in a deep breathe and went under the covers of her bed. And slowly after, fell asleep.
" Sinara?" A soft whisper called through the window. It was Sushin. He crawled into the room and he smiled at her sleeping form. He removed his jacket and gloves and silently crawled into bed next to her leaving a soft kiss on her forehead.
"Good night."
***~~~****
" Can you go already!?" Lauren hissed pushing Malectreco against the wall. He was tired out but wasn't going to give up yet. He laughed as a pillow came flying at his face.
" You know what? Forget you and goodnight I hope the bed bugs bite, and kill you." Lauren glared and crawled into bed leaving motionless Malectreco whining. He shrugged and crawled into bed with her. She gasped and kicked him out.
"Shoo!" She yelled. He grinned and got up walking towards the door.
"Fine, but tomorrow were going to hang out whether you like it or not." He smiled and walked out of the room leaving Lauren dumbfounded.
"He can't come. No one can come..." Lauren whispered to herself feeling a sadness wash over her. She had to find her sister. She needed to keep searching. Jade and Tiger would be waiting for her at Glass city. They were her companions on the search for over a year and yet they never found her, Laurens sister.
" I have to find you. I need to find you. Maybe your looking for me in places when I am looking in opisite places. Maybe were just heading in circles.."Lauren thought bitterly.
" I Need to find you....Evalin."

(authors note)
wow a rush x.x lol. this chapter took me about 55 minutes. so much thinking.
well please comment on my story of what you think ^_^
-My Sister(Vampirexpunk wrote this smile

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