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Burning Love
Glassy eyes wide open. Starring but seeing nothing. Faint expression on her face. It was pail as a ghost. Singed hair hung down in her face. Hands scrunched tightly together. Her skin burnt badly but she didnt feel it. All she felt was her hert beating in her throat. Why had he pushed her out the window? Why didnt he save himself? Why hadnt he come out of the house yet? Why? Why? Why? It felt like these questions would never be answered now. The heat was so intense that it burnt her eyeborws off. She didnt care though. She couldn't move her eyes from that house. *CRACK!!* The house crumbled and toppled to the ground. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" she screamed. Thats where the tears began and she fell to the ground in shock. She lay there, glassy eyes wide open. Starring at everything but seeing nothing. She lay there crying. Then a hand fell upon her shoulder. A kiss placed itsself upon her cheek. This kiss! This familiar kiss! She turned over. "JOHN!!" she cryed out. She threw herself into his arms and he held her for what felt like a hour. This was truely true love.






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silver piro
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 08:24pm
wow how do you come up with these they are really good. no lie mrgreen


commentCommented on: Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 09:30pm
wow i totally like this it was also funny too!! blaugh biggrin 3nodding 4laugh



kyo28
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Mitsuki4You
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commentCommented on: Mon Dec 04, 2006 @ 11:16pm
umm kyo...... it wasnt ment to be funny..... it was supose to be sad..... sad


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