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Israfel's journal of life
Here I write things that happens in my life along with thoughts and contemplations and opinions
My poem for my love
Just two months ago, an angel came into a very critical moment of my life. My my ex who had just broken up me, had slept with one of my best friends just two fays before the separation. I was really really down and was starting not to care about anything, my life, my future, my feelings. This person took this fragmented human being and turned it into something wonderful. My life had new meaning, and even more than he had ever had before. I still think about that time, two months ago, where she opened my heart, letting it shine once again. Now it shines brighter than ever before. I am head over heels in love. There are so many things that I have learned and I feel like I have grown so much in such a short time. I want to be with her forever. One of the new things I have experienced, is the joy of composing and telling my feelings through such things as a poem. This is my poem for her. I hope you like it, and I would love to hear your comments on it.

Happy Again - by Adam Bing


Is this a dream?
If it is, I don't want to wake up
The girl of my dreams standing before me

Is this for real?
Please let it be
I don't ever want it to end

The door to my heart, open
She has the key
The window to my soul, open
Just for her

The longing for her, so strong
The love for her, so strong
Is this really for real?

Happiness overflowing my body
The feeling of her caress
The awareness of her love
I want to be hers

Do I deserve to be this happy?
Am I even worthy?
Will she forever hold the key?
Yes

Her beauty overshines everything
Her inner beauty shines even brighter
Is she too good to be true?

My journey is over
No more roaming in the dark searching for that special, that special person
I have found her!
The long road of life awaits, but I'm not alone
She lights up the path
She is the brightest star in the universe
Just for me?

With her, nothing else matters
Nothing else make me feel this way
This bliss, I want it to last forever
Will she be there forever?
I never want to be apart from her

My angel
My princess
My love
My everything

I love You!


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  • User Comments: [14]
    its good

    comment Sexy_Lemon_Pie · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 11:20am
    How is it good? Which parts?

    comment Israfel85 · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 11:26am
    i'm happy ur happy...that was evil wot ur ex did
    least u av sum1 to love =]

    comment lil_vix · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 11:37am
    I have never as happy as I am now in my entire life

    comment Israfel85 · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 11:39am
    i think its the most amazing poem i have ever read heart

    comment himawari kage · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 11:40am
    I'm glad you all like it. Himawari kage, is it really? heart

    comment Israfel85 · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 11:44am
    yes it is, especialy the part about your journey being over. your ex was a fool and a cruel person to treat you so poorly. your better off with a jackass than that, im glad you found your special person, one who will love you forever and never hurt you. heart

    comment himawari kage · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 11:47am
    I wanted to make this person feel really special smile

    comment Israfel85 · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 11:48am
    i know if it were writen about me i would feel very very special and loved more than anything else in the world. heart

    comment himawari kage · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 11:53am
    I'm sure your special person will come and he/she will never want to let you go, always being there for you.

    comment Israfel85 · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 11:56am
    aw that was really good! =)

    comment SEXY x HOEBAGG · Community Member · Mon Dec 04, 2006 @ 03:21am
    Now I know what this poem is about. I can't say I've been there, I'm only 13. But my heart was aching, it had been for several moths. Why, it almost ruined my summer vacation! After only a few weeks of flirting, this Beotch girl won the heart of the my crush. They dated, and I felt so wretched. For a few weeks IK was anti-social, and I had to put on a false face in front of everyone. I was all sweet, nice, and happiness. Then I cried myself to sleep, and felt no better. But they broke up, and my mood lightened a little. Now this year, he opened up my heart and soul, and I can see through the rain that had poured through my summer.

    comment LadySam · Community Member · Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 01:14am
    A little repetitive, but very sweet. I know exactly how you feel.

    comment Oh Emetophobia · Community Member · Fri Mar 30, 2007 @ 02:36pm
    It was my very first attempt at poetry, but I think I have gotten the hang of it biggrin

    comment Israfel85 · Community Member · Fri Mar 30, 2007 @ 03:17pm
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