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Hi. This is my journal and my journal can be sad and pretty funny sometimes. I like to put songs,poems,ect. in my journal so please read them and comment them on my profile and stuff.
Why Did I Have To Go?
This is a story that i wrote yesterday evening it is really sad but i hope you like it and please leave a comment thanx.

Like people say, you never no when your life shall end. So take life day by day and do the things you are longing to do. Well anyway, this is a fictional story that might teach people a very good lesson so here it is.

Why Did I Have To Go?
By: Ellen Kade

As I scream, they cover my mouth and I try to cry for someone's help, and pray that God will get me out of this. The kidnappers throw me into a van and tie my hands and feet together. I cry out to Jesus and I am crying so hard. Now they tape my mouth and my eyes grow very wide. I try to make them stop but they hold me down. As they close and lock the doors, my eyes are wide with fear, and I am thinking at that very moment why I would go out alone in a city at night without even saying goodbye to my mother and father. I feel so terrible right now that I could kill over. I relized that i must have fallen asleep because when I awoke, I had been slapped a couple of times. When I got out, it was late at night(around 11:00) and we were at a lake. They uncovered my mouth and i tried to scream but nothing would come out. We walked over to a dock and they pushed me in the water. I screamed but it was already too late. I was in the water trying to keep myself up out of it and trying to untie my hands. Right then I knew that I was going to die so i prayed a silent prayer to God that when I died I would not go to Hell. Now as my lungs fill up with water, I thought of all the good times i had had with my family and friends. Now everything was totally black. I had passed away now, and as my soul goes to Heaven, I look down at my body and think again of my family and friends and how much they would miss me. When i died, I was only 12 years of age and i must say that drowning is not the best way to leave this world. I tell you again that no one knows when their life shall end so live your life fully and get saved before it's to late.


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  • User Comments: [5]
    it's really a sad story. but i really admire you. when i was at your age, i just know how to play games.
    and it's true that we should cherish our lives. cuz we just can live our lives for once.
    every day we live is a lucky day.

    comment tomgeniewang · Community Member · Fri Nov 24, 2006 @ 12:41pm
    its true that was very sad, the lesson in this story was made loud and clear and i truly think its true. many people think that life gives a second chance but actually u wont ever remember what happened in ur past life when u are reborn as a new person....

    comment x_Devilish_Angel_x · Community Member · Fri Nov 24, 2006 @ 03:53pm
    wow...u have a lot of potential as a writer, and your story is amazing and creative
    just a quick tip: stick to one tense, especially in the same sentence heart

    comment tantuna92 · Community Member · Fri Nov 24, 2006 @ 06:51pm
    woof(wow.....its a good thing ive never been in a situation like that......but I agree that u should live your life to the fullest) 3nodding

    comment blackwolf1000 · Community Member · Fri Nov 24, 2006 @ 10:08pm
    its very sad but very good i heart it 3nodding very good job!

    comment amandahoughton · Community Member · Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 02:40am
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