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Creations from inside.
I'm going to write what comes to my head........Which would be something, nothing, or so many other things. Come on! Comment dammit! I'm never sure if you people look or not XD
I know this may not be good as other poems. But this is just what I feel. Sort've......Mmm....I've gone insane haven't I? XXD

I wish I'd.....

Dammit, why do these thoughts keep coming?!?!?!
Again and again, it's making me crazy!!!
I just want it to stop, like anything else!
*Chorus*
Someone just stab me in the heart! I can't take it anymore!
It's driving me insane! Over and over again!
I'm goin in over my head and there's nothing I can do........
*end*
My life, it's spinning outta my control.
My thoughts, are driving me insane!
Don't know how long this'll last but I'm going crazy!!!
*Chorus*
Someone just stab me in my heart! I can't take it anymore!
It's taking my sanity! All over again!
I'm thinking it's in my head and there's one thing I can do....
*End*
I hate it, I loathe it so damn much!!!
Yet I like it at the same damn time!!
The same feeling that drives people nuts, it's making me crazy!!
*Chorus*
Please just stab me in the heart, I can't handle it anymore!!
It's gonna take me, any time over again!!
It's in my head and I keep thinking about it again and again til I gotta do something!
*End*
It's makin me loopy, loony, and crazier then ever!
Though it's a little, it caused all of this!
Anymore and my heart can't take it.
*Final Chorus*
Please.....Someone.....Stab me in the heart, I can't take it!
It's about to get me, one last time!
It's in my head, spreadin in me like a flu. I..Don't think I can do this anymore.
*End Final Chorus*
I guess I gotta say.
What's been driving me crazy all along.
Well, here it goes, I just hoped you'd know.....

Signed, Hidden Shyster






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yuna_summouner
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commentCommented on: Tue Nov 21, 2006 @ 08:36am
this is sweet and sad T.T


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 21, 2006 @ 08:37am
It's just a mix of romance, reality, fantasy, and well....me XXD



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Tue Nov 21, 2006 @ 09:00am
I love it! Do you have music for it?


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 21, 2006 @ 09:02am
o.O? Heck no! I'm not rich XD I just made this up while.....Thinking. And listening to many songs but that wasn't the basis. God! Dark and gloomy days bring out the emo in me ._.



theshyster
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mmmmmpie
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 22, 2006 @ 02:14am
It lacks flow, and style.

Though you convey your message well, it's just cumbersome and difficult to read.

Not difficult, but I mean unpleasant.

._.;


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 22, 2006 @ 02:22am
Make fun of my poems, will you?

>.>

The heart of longing,

The yearning soul,

The song of choices,

Haunting voices,

Of my past,

Come at last,

To tell me of my sins.

What I've done,

If I told you,

Never...

Would you see me...

As you did.



mmmmmpie
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 22, 2006 @ 09:13pm
If I wanted to make something like that, I would! But I need to let things vent out sometimes ._.


commentCommented on: Mon Nov 27, 2006 @ 03:26am
XD.
You have a knack for writing poetic stuff.
Good job, kid.
Even if I may be younger than you.
HUZZAH!



Shirunai
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 27, 2006 @ 04:02am
._. I am younger then you. Thanks too. I think


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 11:21pm
Unless you're born in '94, then you're older. HUZZAH~!!!
Was it supposed to be some love song for your girlfriend?



Shirunai
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 29, 2006 @ 12:19am
._. I was born in '93 And no, it wasn't. I just wrote it since it was in my head. >.>


commentCommented on: Mon Dec 18, 2006 @ 01:03am
EXACTLY.
You're older...I'm the last of december in '93 :]
but still...good job, kid.



Shirunai
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 19, 2006 @ 04:38am
XXD Then stop ccalling me kid. Or I'll call you baby gonk


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 23, 2006 @ 06:50pm
MWAHAHAHA

I'm older than ALL of you. BOW DOWN TO MEEE! twisted



FrostedMizu
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 23, 2006 @ 07:38pm
Mmm....I'm pretty sure Pie is 16 yrs. and something months old.


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 08:14pm
Who's Pie?



Shirunai
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 27, 2006 @ 08:34pm
*points up* Him. Other wise known to me as Ricky. (His name is Eric and I just like to call him 'Ricky) xD


commentCommented on: Thu Dec 28, 2006 @ 04:28am
I thought her name was umm... nvm I don't remember. Umm Kari? lol, nvm



FrostedMizu
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 28, 2006 @ 10:42pm
Whose name?


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 14, 2007 @ 04:24am
HEY IM THE CRAZY AND INSANE ONE AROUND HERE
and u got stabed?
OMG
ARE U STILL ALIVE?
ANSWER ME!@!



tropical_water
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 23, 2007 @ 08:29am
yes yes yes???


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