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this is a story i wrote for my creative writing class so tell me what you think k? thanx ^^ its kind of like xenosaga but who cares hehe and its called Kristal wars! hehe tell me what you think!



"so how far are we from Garvav?" Shion asks me. "we are 4.50064

kilographs away from our target." I say. "so about 2 hours." Shion says looking at the

window. Then a boy with red hair and blue eyes walks in. "hey what up?" "oh hey Gainen

did you finish toonig up the A.W.T.V.'s?" "sure did there all ready for action." "good." I

look at Gainen he was kind of short but he was an android so he was made about 20 years

ago but he looks about 13 years old. then there Ed he's also a android but he was made

about 35 years ago so he's kind of out dated but he still looks 16 with his pure white hair

and his green eyes and tan skin. he smiles at me. I then look at shion she's a super genius,

shes 25 years old and she has brown ahir and greenish blue eyes, she also has a twin

brother he's in the back room. I'm knocked out of my thoughts to hear Shion. "Ed could

you reaserch if there is inhabbitents on Garvav?" "sure" he says then walks over to a

station and brings up a holographic screen and starts typing. We are heading to Garvav to

find out about me, why I was made and what is my purpose i don't remember who created

me I only know is that I was made on Garvav, Shion found some info in my data bank.

We might have to use the A.W.T.V.'s on Garvav, because I don't know if the air is

breathable, and i don't really need to breath because I'm an android, and A.W.T.V means

AUTO WEAPON TRANSPORTAION VIECHAL. There very useful. I'm once again

knocked out of my thoughts to see S.A.D.W. and Zigar and jin walk in. I wonder why

andoirds have some personallity but cyborgs don't Zigar is a cyborg and S.A.D.W. has a

personalitly and S.A.D.W. means SEARCH AND DESTROY WEAPON she's short and

has red hair and golden eyes but we just call her Sall instead of saying the other thing. "I

wonder if the ELZA 4602 will make it there?" Shion ponders. "I'm sure it will." Gainen

says. "we are here." I say emtionlessly. Gainen looks at the grey and green planet. "it's so

small!" he says looking at it. "well yay no one lives there its uninhabbited." Ed says

getting up from his work station. "so there no one there." "not that i know of." "krista do

you kow anything?" "theres nothing in regareding that in my main frame data." "oh i

see." Then I look to the right. "there is an unidentafied craft coming from the west."

"what?" everyone looks to the right to see five crafts flying in a dance like formation

heading to Garvav they start to swirl around it they start going so fast that there is a bright

blue steam following them then there was a blinding like and when it was gone there was

some kind of force feild around Garvav. "there trying to keep us out!" Gainen says

inraged. "Maybe we could break it." "thats imposible its to big but maybe we could make

a small opening in it so we can get through but we will have to be quick." Ed says. "well

Krista do you think your up to it?" "yes I am." I say while nodding. "ok lets do it!" Gainen

says. next thing i knew i was standing on top of the ELZA 4602 with magighes floating

around me. "ok Krista do it anytime." Shion said in my transmitter. I nod then my

mobolizer covering my eyes looking though it i see the excact coorwadanates. Then I

raise my right arm which is an arm cannon right now then the other mechines start hype

up. Then I shoot a huge beam comes from my arm the a whole bunch of other beams

come beside me from the other cannons. The beams hit the force feild making a shock

wave from it then when the beams dissapates. "what it didn't work!" I here Shion say

though the transmitter. "try it again." "ok" I raise my arm again but this time the cannon

it a little bit bigger. "Maximum Alput" then these cyber looking wings come from my

back and i fire at the force feild making a big explosion then the beams dissapte agine and

theres a hole big enough for the ELZA 4602 to get through. then we fly though it and as

soon as we got in there the hole closed up i went back in the other guns disapeared and

my wings and mobelizer too. "look it's all misty down there." Gainen says. We then land

in a small clearing surrounded with trees. "we have to find out if the air is breathable."

Shion says. "the altitude is normal, and so is the atmosphere." Ed says. "lets just use the

A.W.T.V.'s" Gainen says. We nod. "Krista you ride with Ed this time Sall your with me."

I nod. i get into the bottom part of the A.W.T.V. and Ed gets in the seconed seat a little

bit above me. It looks like I'm not even in a weapon the walls are see though all that we

see is the seats we are sititng in. then we start to huver and make our way though the

paths following Shoin and Sall and Jin and Gainen behind us. Zigar stayed behind just

incase there really are people on this planet. we then stop because there is somthing

blocking our path some kind of big daimond. "how are we ganna get though that?" I here

Gainen say. "look theres another way lets try it." Shion says. so we do and we go up and

up till we get to a opening theres another daimond thing but it's a little smaller. Shion

hits it and it falls down and hits beside the daimond. "hey maybe we could brake the

other one by hitting it with another?" Jin says. "yeah theres another one up there." Ed

says. "is that going to hit it?" "yes it will the corrdanates are pasific." I say. "ok then lets

go do that." we turn around and make our way up when we finally get there Shion hits it

and it falls onto the other one and it shatters. "yes! we did it!" Gainen says. "ok lets get

back down there." when we get down there, there's a cave when we go through it, it's a

big room withwierd writting on the walls. "well well well what do we have here?" we all

look up to seesome guy with pure white hair and golden eyes. "Almakido!" Gainen yells.

"well hello brother nice to see you again." he says mockingly "yeah right!" "what are you

doing here?" Shion yells. "well I had a little arron to attend to but I guess that can wait."

hejumps into his A.W.T.V. then there was some kind of weird glow around our

A.W.T.V.'s then they shut down. "sorry i didn't tell you but my A.W.T.V. can disable

yours" he snickers. we jump out of our A.W.T.V.'s "thats no fair Almakido!" "oh well."

he then brings up the arm of his A.W.T.V. and fires at us I go up front and block the

attack by bring my arm up and hitting it to the side. "using Krista as your sheild is nothing

she wontbe for long." he then starts to fly up. "wait! what do you mean?" but it was to late

he was already out of site. "darn" Gainen says kicking the dirt. "well at least he's gone."

Jin says. "yeah but now we can't use our A.W.T.V.'s" Sall says. "well we will just have to

walkthen." Shion says holding out her imobolizer out making the A.W.T.V.'s dissapear.

"well come on lets get going." we nod and start walking we go through different places

withsome kind of monsters that are gross looking. I hit a ston wall and it breaks and there

area set of step going up. we then walk up the and come to a wierd looking graveyard

with mist everywhere. "what a weird place" Gainen says. "I agree." Sall says. I walk to a

rock and move it out of the way and keep walking the rest follow. "krista where are we

going?" " i don't really know but it looks formillar." I move all the big rocks out of the

way to find a big tombstone. i change my right arm into a cannon. "arm cannon!" and I

fire and the tombstone blows up. then there is another set of stairs but going down. we

then walk down them. when we get down there, there are a bunch of coffens in the

ground some are brocken. "hey look whats that?" Sall points to a scipture on the wall

above a wooden cross. "I can't read it" "neither can I it's in a different language." "Der

Wille Zur Macht, Jenseits Von Gut Und Bose, Also Sprach Zarathustra." I say looking at

it. "you know what it says?" "I didn't know i could theres nothing like this in my data

banck." "humm that's weird. but do you know what it mean?" "no all I know is how to say

it." "humm..thats a little weird." Gainen says. Then I turn around and deflect an attack and

when the light of the attack dissapears and women is standing there. "who are you?"

Shion yells. "I am Krystal and I am here to destroy the out dated other version of me."

she says and looks at me with her dark green eyes and her bluish dark hair almost

like mine but mine is a little lighter. "why do you want to get ride of Krista?" Shion

asks. "Der Wille Zur Macht, Jenseits Von Gut Ung Bose, Also Sprach Zarathustra

do you know what that means? well of course not what it means is the angel

will vancwish the demon." "so what does that have to do with krista?" Gainen yells.

"it means I have to vancwish her,the demon." "what?!" "and i have pasific order

from my creater to git rid of you." "creater?!" Krystal smirks.then all of a sudden

Krystal comes at me in super speed. I dodge her attack. "so I was created, to be

destroyed!?" I yell "well not at first but after you wouldn't follow through with

your mission she desposed of you and created me so i could get

rid of you just in case some one were to bring you back." She says looking at Shion

then back at me and brings her arm up and points it at Shion. "no stop!" she fires and

I jump infront of it blocking it but it pushes me back and I fall. "don't you see i'm

way more stronger then you Krista!" she says with an insane smile. "I dont care."

I get back up. Then something feels like it goes through my head and I lean over then

start to twitch uncontrollably. "krista whats the matter?" "you see the demon inside

her is coming out she is evil." Krystal says smirking. then i loose all controll of my body

and my eyes turn red. "krista!?" I turn around and look at them. "arm cannon!" I shot at

them. Then a force feild came infront of them. "what is the meaning of this?" I turn around

and look at Krystal. "don't think i'm that stupid. your the one i'm going to destroy." "what!?"

then cyber wings come from my back and the other cannons come out of no where and my arm

turns into an arm cannon. and my mobolizer comes over my eyes. "you see you were wrong your

the demon....Maximum Alput!" then i shoot at her. she brings her arms up to shield herself but it

didn't work. All that was herd was a loud persing scream. then when the light went away all

that was left of Krystal was a few broken parts. the force feild come down and then run to me as

all my weapons got away. "wow krista! that was aswome!" Gainen yells. "yes it was but how

did you do that force feild?" Shion asks. "I didn't do that." "what..then who did?" "i did" we turn

to see a woman with brown hair and glasses. "i'm Dr. Hitoriku i'm the creater of Krista." "what

really but then why did you make Krystal?" "I didn't make her my twin sister did, but don't worry

she's been put away." "so your my creater?" "yes and i guess your wondering why I created you?"

I nod. "well I made you to be a daughter but i also know that you would have to face my twin sisters

android Krystal. but since you destroyed her now you can live a semi-normal life with great friends."

she says. "so what are you going to do?" Ed asks. "well..." "of course." "thanck you." "welcome abord."

Ed says. "wait did I miss something?" Gainen asks confused. we all laugh and start to walk back to the ELZA

"wait really whats going on?" "you must be Gainen nice to meet you" she says and meeses up Gainen's hair.

"hey!" I chuckle. "come on lets go back home." Shion says as Ed gets ready to take off. "right!" Sall says.

By that time the force feild was gone and we all went back home, living a semi-normal life. This is Krista

till next time see ya!