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Things in my mind
The things I think up when I'm bord.
Fear: part 1

As your heart beats in you chest, you walk along side your best friend down the slender blood stained hall. There is no one else in the hall yet you hear a faint scream, as if it was coming from afar. Your friend and you come to a door and stop, looking at the blood rusted face of it. your heart jumps when you and your freind hear a loud sound behind you, like the sound of a large blade being drug across the floor. You can't see what it is for the only light is a small torch beside the door. Your friend grabs your arm and pulls you into the room. Yet again the only light is a small torch beside the door, and you hear strange sounds coming from the darkness in front of you. Your friend, going against your wishes, travels into the darkness of the room to find more light. For a long while you hear nothing' but then a screeching cry erupts from the dark and you recognize it as your friends voice. The cry stops with a gurgling sound and you hear a low thud. You sit there watching the dark for what seemed like forever till you hear another sound, one that sounded like wet clothes being drug. You watch with wide eyes full of fear as the now faint figure on the ground draws closer. as it reaches the light you realize its your friend........... or at lest the top half of them. they reach out for your hand but then is drug back into the darkness as if a strong force was pulling them, leaving you in the room...................... alone.


Kairi Saka
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  • User Comments: [7]
    I'd buy the novel!!!...lol....You gotta send me the rest im gona die not knowing what happens next!

    comment marissa_roboto · Community Member · Sun Oct 08, 2006 @ 08:52pm
    Wow... Thats very nice

    comment Dragon Tripartite Lord · Community Member · Sun Oct 08, 2006 @ 10:00pm
    LOL, I remember you sending me this over PM to ask me what I thought... But yeah I Love it, Its great!!! mrgreen heart

    comment Voodoo Sage · Community Member · Mon Oct 09, 2006 @ 05:55am
    eek WOW!! that whas very good thrills and chills, very nice 3nodding 4laugh

    comment Sweetiepie Jade · Community Member · Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 06:11pm
    wow that was really good add more

    comment Izzy21 · Community Member · Wed Jan 03, 2007 @ 06:23pm
    Very nice I love the superstishion of it all

    comment NitumAnon · Community Member · Fri May 04, 2007 @ 08:18am
    a chill went down my spine while I was reading it
    very suspenseful *reads on*

    comment Wolfie_chan · Community Member · Tue Sep 30, 2008 @ 07:33am
    User Comments: [7]

     
     
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