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Ashieru's Journey
A little black book basically. I'm young love to draw and am very stubborn. i have many friends and appreciate them all. If you see me please give me a few pointers.
MY SAD STORY DAT U SHOULD ALL READ
I HELD THE BLADE IN ONE HAND, IT'S SHEATH IN THE OTHER. I STARED AT WHAT MY BROTHER WAS TURNING INTO. HIS ONCE BLACK EYES GREW INSTEAD OF THE FACE OF THE MAN I WAS PROUD TO CALL MY ONII-CHAN WAS COVERED WITH A SHAMEFUL MASK. RENJI HAD BECOME A HOLLOW. "SO WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR I THOUGHT YOU WERE SUPPOSSED TO KILL HOLLOWS" I LOOKED UP AT HIM. TEARS STREAKING MY FACE, BLOOD BLENDING INTO THOSE HORRENDOUS TEARS "ONI-CHAN CAN YOU HEAR ME" "WHO THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT" HE LASHED OUT AT ME AND I COULD BARELY DODGE, HE HAD HOOKED MY ANKLE WITH ONE OF HIS CLAWS. "ONII-CHAN..... I'M SORRY" I CUT THE HOLLWS ARM BARELY MAKING A SCRATCH. "WHY ARE YOU HURTING ME ASH" I FELT TEARS DOWN MY FACE "ONII-CHAN" THE HOLLOW SMILED "I HAVE YOU NOW" I SAW HIS HUMONGOUS TEETH AND FINALLY REALIZED MY BROTHER HOLLOW OR NOT WOULD NEVER HURT ME "DON'T TOUCH ME YOU....." I DIDN'T FINISH MY SENTENCE I THREW MY BLADE AT HIS HEAD AND IT STUCK. I JUMPED OFF HIS HAND AND THRUST THE BLADE INTO HIS MASK. AT THAT MOMENT THE MASK BROKE AND I SAY MY BLADE NOT THRUSTED IN A HOLLOW BUT MY BROTHERS FOREHEAD. HE WAS CRYING AND I BEGAN CRYING I TOOK THE BLADE OUT OF HIS FOREHEAD I DROPPED MY SWORD AND SAW RENJI'S BODY LIMP. I RAN TOWARDS IT. "I'M SORRY" HE STOPPED CRYING. HE SMILED AT ME AND PRESSED THE PALM OF HIS HAND AND ON MY CHEEK. "I DON'T KNOW......WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN BUT REMEMBER I LOVE, SIS" I FELT HIS HAND DROP AND I REALIZED IT NO MATTER HOW MUCH I DIDN'T WANT TO SAY IT. I KILLED MY BROTHER. I BEGAN TO SOB ON RENJI'S DISSAPEARING BODY. I FELT SOMEONE'S HAND ON MY SHOULDER. I SAW BYAKUYA AND RENJI'S BODY WAS GONE "WHY.....WHY DID IT HAVE ......TO BE HIM" HE PUSHED ME IN FOR A DEEP EMBRACE "YOU CAN LIVE WITH ME IF YOU WANT" I KNEW HE WAS TRYING TO BE NICE. I LOOKED UP AT HIM. I THINK RENJI WOULD LIKE THAT" HE SMILED AND POINTED TO THE GROUND "I THINK HE LEFT U SOMETHING" HE POINTED TO THE GOLD NECKLACE ON THE FLOOR WHERE RENJI WAS. I PICKED IT UP AND UNDER IT WAS A NOTE. IT READ


I LOVE U ASHIERU AS MY SISTER. I'M SORRY FOR HURTING YOU BUT DON'T DWELL ON THE PAST OR ME. LOOK TOWARDS HAPPINESS AND REMEMBER EVEN IF I DIE I LOVE U. PLEASE TELLL NAIKORO I'M DEAD AND PLEASE MOVE IN WITH BYAKUYA I KNOW YOU WILL BE HAPPIER WITH HIM. BE CAREFUL. I LOVE YOU


SOOOOO WHAT DO U THINK


iAshieru
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  • User Comments: [10]
    *sniff* no Renji!!!!!!!!!!!! (i'm Naikoro) wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh crying crying crying dramallama emo

    comment FallenDeathGod125 · Community Member · Thu Oct 05, 2006 @ 11:06pm
    yeps really good me likes

    comment clawsy · Community Member · Sat Oct 07, 2006 @ 03:12am
    That was pretty good. You should talk to my brother about this story. He's good at writing stories too. His name is Fanoto.

    comment PieDoctor · Community Member · Tue Oct 10, 2006 @ 11:55pm
    Good good smile love it

    comment Crazy_Vamp666 · Community Member · Wed Oct 11, 2006 @ 11:52pm
    That. Is. So. Cool. eek Seriously. It's awsome so far mrgreen You should continue it... Please? I wanna read mooore! whee

    comment Little Miss Mister · Community Member · Thu Oct 12, 2006 @ 12:44am
    yeps me likeys keep the story up xp xd

    comment clawsy · Community Member · Thu Oct 12, 2006 @ 01:25am
    Wow you have such great thinking in to stories you know?I love it so much you know!Its kinna scary tho....cause blades an all that its just soo cool!i love it! mrgreen xd

    comment Spwinkled Cupcake · Community Member · Fri Oct 13, 2006 @ 01:53am
    thanks all

    comment iAshieru · Community Member · Fri Oct 13, 2006 @ 09:02pm
    she put me in this story........*in fetal position* RENJI.......RENJI...... I WANT YOU BACK

    comment FallenDeathGod125 · Community Member · Sat Oct 14, 2006 @ 02:29am
    crying heart i loved it up until the part where she kills her bro........ crying crying crying crying TOO SAD!!!!!

    comment fire_baby_07 · Community Member · Thu Nov 02, 2006 @ 10:47pm
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