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Songs! and the random stuff that I think about, and what happens during my day.
Poems
Yes well... These are poems. Most of them Suck. But I'm posting them anyway, please comment. whee

Shadows

The mind is like a fire
Constantly lit
And waiting to be fed
It is sometimes fickle
And blown about
By the winds of change and indecision
But it can be strong
And burn with unexpected
Brilliance
It can never be completely doused
Or turned off
Though it makes shadows
That play tricks on you



Behind Those Walls



The mind is a mansion
Full of common place findings
And popular walk ways
That are traveled on from day to day

All the same walls and pictures
That float through thought
Over and over
Until they become habit
Blinded by lack of interest

It is flecked with dark passages
Forgotten rooms hardly used
Secrets that are hidden in the basement
Starved for sunlight and rotting the soul

Locked doors and bared windows
That are separated from conscienceless
Because of
Fear,
Hurt,
Hate,
Or other strong emotions

The mind is not as familiar and known ad we would like to believe.
Many things lay hidden behind those walls.




Restless

The mind is like a wheel
Constantly turning
Never giving rest to those
Who build up
Too much
Momentum

It carries us far
To new places and thoughts
Defying the expectations of others
So that it may run smoothly
With a free pace totally its own.



Bodiless noise

As associated with voice
There came a wind
Rushing by with a whir
That filled the ears with a murmur
And ruffled skirt hems and shirt sleeves

It licks across both faces and hands
Any and all exposed skin
Cutting through clothing
And puncturing the shell
With needles of ice

Changing the scenery in rapid succession
By carrying away clouds and loose objects
And causing turbulence to the leaves of the tall trees
And the underlying blackberry bushes

This, though, only lasts until the sun decides to emerge
Chasing the cold away like a mother come upon a unwanted hand in the cookie jar
The child chastised and sent to his room in tears
The day is still and the cliff is silent once more.





A Run in the Night


Called
The rising moon, so still and calm
Awakens something formally silent
A peace that is shattered
And replaced with an emotion an action
That is impossible to control
I am no longer what I was
The change has begun

Rage
It causes all to be turned red
My view of the world thus blinded
The black tinged freedom so alien to me
But this has become my one true desire.

This new ecstasy that sends me running and jumping through the air
Triumphant in my defeat
Trapped in a place where hands turn to claws.

The madness inside burning with intense heat
As though a fire were imploding my soul.
The waves of storming compulsion crash against my semi conscience mind
Wanting me to destroy something, to let some of this all out.

I rant, I rave, I plunder
Taking what I need from the night
I never have to mimic the expectations of others in this free world
I am what I am compelled to be.
I no longer need a mirror to tell me what my true self really is.


Elavine
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  • User Comments: [9]
    nice i like the behind those walls and a run in a night xd

    comment Hip Hop Baby · Community Member · Sun Aug 20, 2006 @ 03:18am
    ME LOVES THEM! mrgreen mrgreen mrgreen

    comment BattleFoxes · Community Member · Sun Aug 20, 2006 @ 03:24am
    AWSHOME POETRY!!!

    comment Reina Renard · Community Member · Sun Aug 20, 2006 @ 05:06am
    pretty good stuff, i dont know alot about poetry but i think yours is pretty spiffy 3nodding I see you are intrigued by the mind, such a fascinating thing, but my brain hurts when i think about it too much sweatdrop its amazing what the human mind is capable of!

    comment RoninSaint · Community Member · Sun Aug 20, 2006 @ 08:53am
    They're all pretty good. I like the last one best. It is very true to you I think. This doesn't mean you're going to become all deep and crap like your sis and my bro, right?

    comment LilyMomma · Community Member · Sun Aug 20, 2006 @ 01:43pm
    I'm not exactly intrigued by the mind, that was an assignment for a creative writing class. sweatdrop Though I do tend to think that way when it comes to mindfullness. And NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O......... If that ever happens Momma, please for the love of God slap some sence into me!

    comment Elavine · Community Member · Sun Aug 20, 2006 @ 02:24pm
    and i'm surprised your not famous yet.

    comment punk_fox44 · Community Member · Sun Aug 20, 2006 @ 02:39pm
    This is wonderful it made me cry

    comment megamoneymaker · Community Member · Thu Aug 24, 2006 @ 11:48pm
    well ely it looks as if you have more fans for your poetry than I do for my art XD

    comment Sales minion · Community Member · Tue Oct 24, 2006 @ 12:27am
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