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Eat s**t Bill Cosby!!
Go to hell and burn George .W. Bush!
I've got a poem for ya'll!
It's from a friend of mine, she's kind of depressing...

I think I'll draw a picture
A picture with a twist.
I'll draw with a razor,
I'll draw it on my wrist.
And If I draw correctly
A fountain should appear.
And as this fountain flows
My pain should disappear.

Yes, the word twist appears twice.
Got a problem with that?

If you have any poems you'd like to to post, just leave a comment with the poem in it.
It would be cool if I could have a 'poem journal entry' going on!


Hara Kari
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  • User Comments: [2]
    that's pretty bitching. surprised
    on the fourth line, i think it could sound good as
    "i'll draw it on my wrist."
    that doesn't mess up the rhyming pattern, does it?
    and remember my poem fragment, that four line thing i sent you?
    you can post that.


    comment N0n Sequ1tur · Community Member · Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 12:13am
    Shweet.
    If I can find it that is....
    Oh boy...


    comment Hara Kari · Community Member · Tue Aug 22, 2006 @ 02:51am
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