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junk, junk, and oh yeah, more junk!
My thoughts, poems, and CRAZY stories!
these are my first poems to put in my journal there not that good PLEEEEEESE comment
I heart constructive critisisim


heart US heart
I draw the curtains
and lie on the floor
the noise in my head is unbearible
but I can't block it out
thoughts about us
I feel like you betraied me
and now you're gone
you don't care how I've been
or whats going on
please come back lets just start over
but I know you won't
I know you don't care
it's time to move on
but I can't stand the way you look at me
I really am sorry
the way you walk by like we never met
the way you ignore me when I try to smile
if thats the way you act
I'd rather not know you
so I guess we're gone
I guess we're over


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  • User Comments: [2]
    I think it's good. You need to work on your spelling though...as always
    sweatdrop
    But then.....
    I can't spell ethier.....
    So,.....I like it!

    heart -Padfoot

    comment Slaughter Party · Community Member · Sat Jul 08, 2006 @ 10:07pm
    I read this one before. It's really good, Laws! :3

    comment Miss LL-Sama · Community Member · Wed Jul 12, 2006 @ 07:02pm
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