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Creations from inside.
I'm going to write what comes to my head........Which would be something, nothing, or so many other things. Come on! Comment dammit! I'm never sure if you people look or not XD
I have no clue how I made this one up...........Kinda influenced by Yuna's poem....And that I made it within 15 mins! lol............

Last walk

As I walk through the darkness, I see the things I never thought I'd see again.
All the hate, the jealousy, and even the fear that lurked within my mind.
I always thought, that this would never exist.
But it did, deep inside my mind.
As I walk deeper into the darkness, I see things I had before.
The fighting, the death, all around me it happens.
I don't know why but it didn't even matter how hard I tried now.
To block away the feelings I had, I realized I had made my mistake.
When I reached the center of darkness......I saw what laid within.
All the feelings I had for you, what I thought of you, even what I dreamed of you.
I know now that I must tell you these feelings, before I walk away from here.
I gotta tell you.........These feelings that I kept so long from you.
Now that you know......I can finally.........Go..........

By:My love that was never meant to be

Kinda sad iddn't it? I just re-read it and noticed I should never give this to someone.................ever.

........I forgot how this came in my mind........And i finally realized why that guy said i should never give this to anyone XD

The.....middle is utter crap, poetry~wise. But the beginning and end contain good tid-bits.






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yuna_summouner
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commentCommented on: Wed May 03, 2006 @ 05:14am
i still cant stop reading tht poem ^^


commentCommented on: Wed May 03, 2006 @ 05:36am
aww... how sad... so beautiful ^.^ waitta go yuna for the influence. lovely job shyster



Aura_Tenchi
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theshyster
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commentCommented on: Wed May 03, 2006 @ 05:45am
Spur of the moment lol


commentCommented on: Fri May 05, 2006 @ 04:40am
i felt the filling that you were saying that was the best peom i have ever read im serious i loved it heart made me sad thats how wonderul it was cry



zasxzasx
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theshyster
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commentCommented on: Wed May 10, 2006 @ 06:52am
You know what zack question I know how you feel man..........I know how you feel.


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 28, 2006 @ 04:01am
wow.... ok, truth for once: that is good.... eek *is shocked*



FrostedMizu
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 14, 2006 @ 11:28pm
Thanks I guess


commentCommented on: Mon Oct 30, 2006 @ 01:53am
Your mom must've been so proud of you rofl



FrostedMizu
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theshyster
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 10, 2006 @ 06:57am
? My mom doesn't even know I write poems. Or could for that matter


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