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Will:Hey Miles...

Me:Hey.

Will:What cha doin?

Me:Thinking...-lays against a tree-

Will:About what?

Me:Something.

Will:Are you thinking about your past relation ships?

Me:Maybe...

Will:You know your brought all of this sorrow onto your self right?

Me:-Sigh-Yes i know...

Will:But life isn't about sorrow.

Me:What is it about then?

Will:Choices...

Me:Choices?

Will:Yes Choices...

Me:Well then the choices i picked weren't good were they?

Will:Come on Miles... Stop saying things like that...

Me:Like what?

Will:Nothing...

Me razz ulls out a note book and starts writing-

Will:What are u writing about?

Me:Nothing...

Will: Well I'm about to go cya

Me:Bye -waves-. -Then stands up slowly and stops-

Choices... huh-

-Goes inside and lays down in bed-

-In ten minutes falls asleep-


Noberashi Navaro
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    I think you should add a space after the ":" to make it easier to read. Perhaps actions should be written on another line and not incorporated with dialogue.

    comment SuperSlutPower · Community Member · Thu Jun 13, 2013 @ 08:06am
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