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Ok... I'm a little stumped. I'm thinking about how the character in the story should continue on, but lately, with too much influence by Gundam and anime, I'm starting to veer off course.... Suggestions, anyone? sweatdrop gonk

Posted by: Nightsnow Wed Apr 19, 2006 @ 11:07am

- 夜雪 -

"Oh dear."

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Kinomi Kasuimiko
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Commented on: Wed Apr 19, 2006 @ 11:52am


	((Well, your character seems wonderful, but it seems as though a little too much gloom and doom is hitting his heart. Perhaps, you should try and make a very slow turnaround to give him peace, but that's just my say. Besides, whee is there anything wrong with a Gundam and Anime influence? I think it's great! Throw us something unexpected, I'd say. Something that we wouldn't expect from Snow would be an excellent way to purka reader's interest. The character is becoming predicable, but not necessarily boring. That's all I can think of! >.> Rushes off to school))

Commented on: Wed Apr 19, 2006 @ 05:08pm


	i suggest you take a break from your story and write something easy and something that is... YOU down. maybe a poem or two. smiles

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Lunar Snow
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Commented on: Wed Apr 19, 2006 @ 10:38pm


	I agree with Kinomi and PuppetDoll, though, I think writing stories is just as much you as writing poetry is, but maybe writing some poems would be something of a welcome change. Anyway, I have a whacky suggestion for you, which I will promptly PM to you! O.O

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