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My poems and some other random thoughts and whatnot from my psychotic, depressed, messed up mind.............
Untitled Poem...
This is just a poem I wrote a little while ago..I thought what the hell, and decided to add it here...Those of you reading this, tell me what you think..

I look at you with pleading eyes,
I'm hurting but you know that.
All you do is smirk at me,
And now I know that you don't care.

I came to you for comfort,
But I'll leave with just more pain.
I don't know why I come to you,
Time and time again.

You said you'd always comfort me,
No matter what was wrong.
But every time I turn to you,
It seems you want me gone.

You don't know what I'm going through,
Or how much I need a friend.
One who will stay right by my side,
Until the very end.

But I think that I understand,
That maybe you just don't see,
Just how much I need you now,
Or you wouldn't turn your back on me.

Maybe one day you'll be just like me,
You'll need someone to talk to.
And the person who once said they'd help,
Will turn their back on you.

Doesn't that sound familiar?
That's what you do to me.
And I just wish that you would realize,
Just how much it hurts me.






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Kerrillian
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 05, 2005 @ 10:29pm
It is pretty good, it sounds like there need to be some meter ajustments at various portions but all in all is sounds really good.


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