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What I'm thinking
The internet poem
A brightly coloured, lively screen
of tiny pixels;what do they mean?
a log in screen, to a cyber world?
or place of danger; emotion hurled.

Our faces blank, behind the keys
from whose kind thoughts, such words as these?
With seconds passed, your heart be squeezed
Brings you down, and on your knees.

At long last lies, a house of hope
Beckons you gently, towards the slope
as hands be turning on the clock
the doors slam shut, and start to lock

If you just laughed, and played along
still unaware of what could go wrong
"what lurks in the dark", your heart sadly asks
will you ever escape, their digital masks?

When the line is blurred, between fiction and fact
quickly revealing you're making a pact
chaining your soul, to a website address
opens the window to endless distress.






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Nyangasm
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 23, 2011 @ 02:41am
again u have a very powerful way with words i am speechless wonderful work JACK! x3 :3 smile 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 23, 2011 @ 11:05am
Thanks. I kinda love poetry aha.



AHaikuPerplex
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Nyangasm
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 25, 2011 @ 03:21am
lol me too it's that i dont really post mine alot but now i am :3 i hope u like them it weird tho i just think of the most random stuff sometimes lol i love writing poetry about love it makes me happy ^-^ even though sometimes it can be sad it helps me keep myself in check without crying


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 25, 2011 @ 05:31pm
A lone person behind one screen,
whose tears of misery aren't seen,
can find a friend and share laughter
and feel contempt, then and after.



Cambiano
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Cambiano
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 25, 2011 @ 05:32pm
* content sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 25, 2011 @ 05:33pm
Yes! Looks like you share the same perspective as I do. How depressing we sound. /sigh



AHaikuPerplex
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Nyangasm
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 26, 2011 @ 09:43pm
lol...... yh


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