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Creations from inside.
I'm going to write what comes to my head........Which would be something, nothing, or so many other things. Come on! Comment dammit! I'm never sure if you people look or not XD
Who I am


I am.....
The scorching blaze of the sun and the cold reflection of the moon,
The shining brightness of the sky and the deadly darkness of the abyss,
The kindness in people and the horror within wars,
The shadows of our lives and the light within our eyes,
The happiness that we all share and the bitterness that never leaves,
The world in which we live...
I am.....All that I am....And whoever I always was


By:Theshyster

First work ever made. edited and re-edited dozens and dozens of times. now editing.






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.Amanda.Of.Doom.
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 13, 2006 @ 04:16am
wow that was really good i stink at writing poems that are deep like that crying


commentCommented on: Thu Mar 16, 2006 @ 08:24am
Thanks Amanda....I just thought it up pretty quick tho....then i re-edited it.....and re-edited it....and....you know how it goes lol



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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 16, 2006 @ 06:34pm
Hey that was really, good. Good use of imagery to create mood and meanings, good poetry always says what it wants to without overtly doing so, and you've accoplished that.

I right poetry too, but I'm not that good sweatdrop

Good jog. blaugh


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 17, 2006 @ 05:58am
Heh.....Thanks Cerrone......I wonder how i got that poem in my mind in the first place...if it is a poem anyway....



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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 18, 2006 @ 10:56pm
*stares* do I really have to say anything? Ditto!


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 19, 2006 @ 12:03am
Um....I dunno what you mean but yea! You do have to say somethin 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 19, 2006 @ 12:10am
And I say ditto, Robin! Ditto= *syas the same thing* GREAT JOB!! *is totally a literary loser*


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 19, 2006 @ 03:29am
you dun have to call me robin.......my real name is Thorn you know?????



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 19, 2006 @ 06:35pm
Yeah, I know Robin, but there's this one guy who calls me by my real name, and so I put my anger out on you! (sorry ^^ wink


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 20, 2006 @ 04:43am
lol.....I did call you by your real name Lunay...not right now tho lol



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 20, 2006 @ 08:45pm
*la gasp* so that one guy was YOU!!!! *angry expression*


commentCommented on: Tue Mar 21, 2006 @ 02:10am
O crap! *runs*



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 21, 2006 @ 10:37pm
!!!! Get back here!! *calls the cops on Robin* I know it's ironic XD


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 22, 2006 @ 01:08am
Fine! *runa next to lunay* WHAT DO YOU WANT?!?!?!?



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 22, 2006 @ 04:48am
wow that was a really great poem...thats a seeker poem i think..lol....well u should persue in poetry maybe one smile day u'll be famous good luck!


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 22, 2006 @ 06:12am
A what poem??



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 22, 2006 @ 08:37pm
XD I think she's refferring to your poem named "My poen....." waay up there.


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 22, 2006 @ 08:39pm
*poem



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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 23, 2006 @ 05:32am
good job! so nice. like ur poem!


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 24, 2006 @ 05:55am
Thanks!



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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 12, 2006 @ 03:31am
hey boul jaded said thats a good peom


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 12, 2006 @ 08:38am
lol.......She could just comment on it herself you know lol.......Choto.....Who the hell is jaded???



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commentCommented on: Wed May 17, 2006 @ 07:31am
hi! i think your journal is one of the very first i've commented on. and i really like your poem. i feel like i can relate to it.


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 07, 2006 @ 06:51am
Ack exclaim exclaim exclaim exclaim Nakedness *turns head* Anyway, thanks jgurl



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 12, 2006 @ 01:45am
stare I won't say anything


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 12, 2006 @ 04:01am
XD



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 13, 2006 @ 12:01am
your mom


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 13, 2006 @ 10:49pm
Out od come backs now are we? Can't you do better then that luzui?



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 04:03am
erm.... your dog?


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 15, 2006 @ 01:20am
Just to make this clear. I don't have any pets



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 16, 2006 @ 04:50am
stare fine! Your long lost cousin's dog


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 20, 2006 @ 01:50am
lol



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 26, 2006 @ 02:56pm
when will you start to write a poem that makes any sense??? like shirunai's squirrel poem! (I luff that poem)


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 29, 2006 @ 01:29am
What the hell are you smoking?? All my poems make sense. You lost your common sense remember?



theshyster
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 14, 2006 @ 04:35am
And now that I've regained my common sense, your poems make a little sense but still not as good as Shirunai's squrrell poem (it's a masterpiece!)


commentCommented on: Thu Sep 14, 2006 @ 11:37pm
......................................................Your common sense hasn't found it's home yet XD.........Actually, You never found your common sense.



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