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1 vast afternoon in the midst of the night,when no one in his house was sleep,I there had a vague idea.I was in a secluded room.In there,I had a thought in mind that my brother was planing something.(By th way,my bro is 35.)Then at the moment when that thought came to mind,I climbed the wall by creating holes with my fist.There I hung upside-down like a bat.My heart racing.th-thump,th-thump,th-thump,th-thump.The door opened.My feet were ready and as soon as he saw me,I did a high jump kick in the face.I fliped to the ground.I could feel his indulged anger arousing from his heart.It was then Black vs. White.I thrusted 15 punches,all with just a minimal pain.He laughed"Ha ha ha.Your puny attacks are feeble against my strength.You are worthless!!!!!Humph!"He charged.All I could do was hold up a guard but it did little effect.He pulled my shirt and threw me against the wall."Who is the idiot here?"I respond in pain,stumbling."You are the only idiot here.Prepare to see...true...power...."I grabbed my hand around his neck and forced incopious amounts of pressure.Then he said"Is this all? You arent misunderstood...you're weak!"He stroke a nerve and I exploded with rage."Did you just call me weak? I should kill you now while I have a chance but it's against my nature so I'll let you suffer."He responded"Make me suffer?You have it the other way around! teh...you aren't as weak as I thought but you're still pretty weak."I stare"You wish.You are going down."Without hesitation...I knocked him to the ground.Went up the hole in the wall and had my feet down to crush him.In the end...he lost that battle leaving only the battle scars left as remembrance of that fight.Time aged and the bruises,scars,and cuts were relieved and left.To be continued...





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    RockMusicAlive
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    commentCommented on: Fri Dec 18, 2009 @ 02:46am
    Wow. I like the story! A bit violent, but i liiiiiiiiiiiiiike.


    commentCommented on: Fri Jul 16, 2010 @ 04:01am
    i like the story its very detailed



    lostdeathblackrose
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    OMGkumi
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    commentCommented on: Wed Jul 21, 2010 @ 10:43pm
    cool story.
    it has lots of details on how you felt.
    i cant wait to see what happens next. 4laugh


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