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I wanted to write a poem about somthing other than love so here's one on something else.

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Sky

Tell us what do you see?
What you know of skies above

Tales of gods and heroes
Eternal maps forever etched, white on black

New worlds hidden
wishes written, black canvas, white ink

Soaring stars
Falling, falling
Until something is reached, something is found
What was lost?
What should be found?

Meanings sullied, fading black
Morals twisted, dripping ink

So tell us what you see?
Tell us what you know?

Because all I see is white ink, black canvas
White stars, black sky
White on black

But what am I to say?
What do I know,
For these are the opinions not of the smart or the wise
These are opinions of a hand and brush