Contest Results for my Acrylic Painting
Comments from the judges
Slot 1. Mokitty Theme: Mythical creatures
*The picture is nice itself but I don't see any.... Idea in the picy. And the artist could have drawn the centaurs' feet
*Proportional. but lacking in background and more shading please. Nice job fitting the theme
Slot 2. Marli-oneechan Theme: Clouds
*That picture is awesome.
I love the 'light' effect in the clouds and on the water surface. It's just... amazing heart
*very unique medium chosen. the brush marks are really remarkable. one of a kind of art we have recieved so far
*It's simply gorgeous and had the classic touch of a Monet. Clear winner.
Slot 3. Namiyo Yankomi Theme: Mythical creatures
*Very lovely picture. There are some details I'd like to comment. 1st: the face looks a little weird. And 2nd: the hair could be more... i don't know... It look like some tentacles.
But the rest is very lovely and I love the background and the details on the tail.
*very nice job on the background. i believe there could use more contrast in the coloring to make pictures more 3-D, more depth to it. Hair could be colored differently, looks like a blob instead of stands of hair.
*Very well-made, however, it's not as stunning and eye-catching as Marli's work
Slot 4 v Sugar Coated Dreams v Theme: Mythical creatures
*Well to tell the truth, the anatomy is quite disturbing and the colors look like if it was done very very quickly not caring about how it'll look.
The idea was good but the result isn't that good.
You should learn anatomy. The good start is tracing photos and learn how things look. Then using references and in the end you won't need them at all.
* The girl is not proportional, the messy background takes attention from the girl (foreground). idea is good.
Slot 5.-lin-of-ghost-hunt- Theme: Mythical creatures
*The pic and the idea is nice.
I don't have any comments to it... Except for that it could use a little more shading
*a dreamy picture. very nice job on the line art. Background do matches with the picture's innocence. There should be more contrast in coloring, more shading couldnt hurt. And the boy's arm could be just a little thicker to be proportional.
Slot 1. Mokitty Theme: Mythical creatures
*The picture is nice itself but I don't see any.... Idea in the picy. And the artist could have drawn the centaurs' feet
*Proportional. but lacking in background and more shading please. Nice job fitting the theme
Slot 2. Marli-oneechan Theme: Clouds
*That picture is awesome.
I love the 'light' effect in the clouds and on the water surface. It's just... amazing heart
*very unique medium chosen. the brush marks are really remarkable. one of a kind of art we have recieved so far
*It's simply gorgeous and had the classic touch of a Monet. Clear winner.
Slot 3. Namiyo Yankomi Theme: Mythical creatures
*Very lovely picture. There are some details I'd like to comment. 1st: the face looks a little weird. And 2nd: the hair could be more... i don't know... It look like some tentacles.
But the rest is very lovely and I love the background and the details on the tail.
*very nice job on the background. i believe there could use more contrast in the coloring to make pictures more 3-D, more depth to it. Hair could be colored differently, looks like a blob instead of stands of hair.
*Very well-made, however, it's not as stunning and eye-catching as Marli's work
Slot 4 v Sugar Coated Dreams v Theme: Mythical creatures
*Well to tell the truth, the anatomy is quite disturbing and the colors look like if it was done very very quickly not caring about how it'll look.
The idea was good but the result isn't that good.
You should learn anatomy. The good start is tracing photos and learn how things look. Then using references and in the end you won't need them at all.
* The girl is not proportional, the messy background takes attention from the girl (foreground). idea is good.
Slot 5.-lin-of-ghost-hunt- Theme: Mythical creatures
*The pic and the idea is nice.
I don't have any comments to it... Except for that it could use a little more shading
*a dreamy picture. very nice job on the line art. Background do matches with the picture's innocence. There should be more contrast in coloring, more shading couldnt hurt. And the boy's arm could be just a little thicker to be proportional.
