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Random poetry
This is where i write down my poems. I love to write even though everything i write is stupid. Read if you want. I love my poetry though so comment nice please.
The Suffering
This is for my cousin who has Anesthesia. It's where you can't talk or make contact or speech because they is something wrong with that part of your brain. He was on Tv and when I watched it I felt so sad cause he just stared into space. I started crying. This is for Callum, my anesthesiaic cousin.

The suffering

I see this person
On Tv
And I know he's suffering
more then me.

I listen with attentivness
to the plastic sweetness
of the tv reportess
Who's obviously not
suffering more then me

I look with sorrow
apon a boy
No older then me
who just looks with blankness
at the Tv.

He doesn't speak or understand
He's completely a one-man-stand.
All he does is stare into space
While everyone else looks at his face.

He's completely stuck in
his own little world.
With no getting out at all.
I wonder does he choose that
or is there no hope at all
for the boy who does nothing at all.

By KatieKatlin


KatieKatlin
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  • User Comments: [1]
    i wud def start crying too .
    even if he wasnt my cuzin .
    its just so sad to c ppl with disabillities like that .
    my cousic Jaiden had gastrothesis and he died .
    he wasnt even a year old .
    and his twin Michael was perfectly fine .
    my friend Sara has gastrothesis too .
    but she lived through it and is still alive .
    i love her like a sister .
    and im so happy shes not dead .

    comment ViciousVannahh · Community Member · Sat May 30, 2009 @ 11:20pm
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